'Tis the Season
Ah! Sometimes you just gotta laugh. . .79 total reviews
Comment from sunkist1942
Tis The Season
This was a great story.
Written very well.
Great dialogue.
I love Christmas shopping too.
So far I have not had this happen to me:)
I enjoyed this very much:)
Sunkist:)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Tis The Season
This was a great story.
Written very well.
Great dialogue.
I love Christmas shopping too.
So far I have not had this happen to me:)
I enjoyed this very much:)
Sunkist:)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Soo embarrassing!!! Good Lord! Thank you so much! diane
Comment from ShirleyT
I love your story - its so funny, plus the vivid writing gave me all the images to bring it to life.
I share your love for Christmas shopping and the large family, so I can really identify with this excellent story.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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I love your story - its so funny, plus the vivid writing gave me all the images to bring it to life.
I share your love for Christmas shopping and the large family, so I can really identify with this excellent story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hi Shirley! So embarrassing!!! Thank you. . . had to record it for my friends and children. . . diane
Comment from mjesecina
Interesting story,especially because it is biographical.I like them the most.Unusual inspiration for this time,but maybe you have written it before.Original minds about Christmas.All best from Mjesecina
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Interesting story,especially because it is biographical.I like them the most.Unusual inspiration for this time,but maybe you have written it before.Original minds about Christmas.All best from Mjesecina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hello! Just needed to record this for my family and friends. . . so embarrassing!! Take care. . . thank you for your kind review. . . diane
Comment from 1archangel
i ENJOY BIOGRAPHICAL STORIES...this one is great...very interesting from beginning to end...nospags, nits or negative comments...enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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i ENJOY BIOGRAPHICAL STORIES...this one is great...very interesting from beginning to end...nospags, nits or negative comments...enjoyed the read
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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So pleased you stopped by.. . just needed to record for my family and friends. . . how mortifying!! diane
Comment from Oatmeal
Mrs. KT,
It is so strange but about this same thing happened to me one day at Wal-mart in Austin. I was walking out the door and the alarm went off! I was instantly surrounded by four men who asked me to step back into the store. I did and they went through my bags.
The checker had forgotten to turn off the thing in my condoms and that is how the alarm got triggered!
The receipt showed that everything was payed for and they let me go. My boyfriend, Steve, said that they had certainly got the wrong lady because I have never stolen in my life!
I found only one SPAG-
(A) before I knew it, they were laughing, too. All three of them.
**And
Thank you for sharing this wonderful little tale!
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Mrs. KT,
It is so strange but about this same thing happened to me one day at Wal-mart in Austin. I was walking out the door and the alarm went off! I was instantly surrounded by four men who asked me to step back into the store. I did and they went through my bags.
The checker had forgotten to turn off the thing in my condoms and that is how the alarm got triggered!
The receipt showed that everything was payed for and they let me go. My boyfriend, Steve, said that they had certainly got the wrong lady because I have never stolen in my life!
I found only one SPAG-
(A) before I knew it, they were laughing, too. All three of them.
**And
Thank you for sharing this wonderful little tale!
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hello Oatmeal! Thank you for stopping by. The whole experience was so mortifying! Geesh!!! Take care. . . diane
Comment from EllenV
This is hilarious! I loved every minute of this delightful read.
I'm so glad I took time to read just one more story before I go to bed. It's always great to go to bed laughing.
Your writing is exceptional. I would love to read more of your work.
One little nit:
A (should this be and?) before I knew it, they were laughing, too. All three of them.
Best Regards,
Ellen
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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This is hilarious! I loved every minute of this delightful read.
I'm so glad I took time to read just one more story before I go to bed. It's always great to go to bed laughing.
Your writing is exceptional. I would love to read more of your work.
One little nit:
A (should this be and?) before I knew it, they were laughing, too. All three of them.
Best Regards,
Ellen
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I am honored and humbled! It was such a mortifying experience!!! diane
Comment from graybeard47a
This is extremely well written story, It captured my attention then it made me think, almost cry and laugh at the same time. I must say you know how to use your gift and talent. I dont what else to say. This made me really rejoice in the fact that I am a member of fanstory.
I dont care how much I read and review. The talent on this site is simply amazing. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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This is extremely well written story, It captured my attention then it made me think, almost cry and laugh at the same time. I must say you know how to use your gift and talent. I dont what else to say. This made me really rejoice in the fact that I am a member of fanstory.
I dont care how much I read and review. The talent on this site is simply amazing. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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You have truly made my day! I am honored and humbled by your kind review. . . take care. . . diane
Comment from kristin_mast
I really enjoyed your story and found it very humorous. I laughed, felt the embarrassment and then the relief. The sign of a well-written story. I will remember it the next time I am in a similar situation and try to view it with the same good humor!
Kristin
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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I really enjoyed your story and found it very humorous. I laughed, felt the embarrassment and then the relief. The sign of a well-written story. I will remember it the next time I am in a similar situation and try to view it with the same good humor!
Kristin
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Thank you so much for your kind review! It was a motifying situation, that's for sure! diane
Comment from PearlW
What a lovely story! I didn't think I'd like it, but you really dragged me into it and kept me there until the very end.
I am not one for Christmas shopping, it's in the middle of summer (in South Africa at least), the shops are busy, everyone's cranky (because it's so darn hot!) and a generally miserable time is had by all :). I must say I quite enjoy wrapping presents though.
Thanks for a great read, I was so wrapped up in the story I forgot to look for SPAG and nits ;)
Pearl
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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What a lovely story! I didn't think I'd like it, but you really dragged me into it and kept me there until the very end.
I am not one for Christmas shopping, it's in the middle of summer (in South Africa at least), the shops are busy, everyone's cranky (because it's so darn hot!) and a generally miserable time is had by all :). I must say I quite enjoy wrapping presents though.
Thanks for a great read, I was so wrapped up in the story I forgot to look for SPAG and nits ;)
Pearl
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Hello Pearl! So pleased you stopped by! South Africa!! My goodness. . . this little story has traveled far! diane
