Driving the Distance
Contest Entry: Free Verse - Some Rhyme -76 total reviews
Comment from giftid3
Thank you for your concept, view and thoughts. The journey was interesting and informative. The message you have portrayed of the changes in life amidst the turmoil and hardships shines through with memories mingled amongst the knowledge of a newness and beginning up ahead. Determined strength and focus gives sustenance to the unknown all the while bringing enduring tolerance into the fold. Blessings to you
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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Thank you for your concept, view and thoughts. The journey was interesting and informative. The message you have portrayed of the changes in life amidst the turmoil and hardships shines through with memories mingled amongst the knowledge of a newness and beginning up ahead. Determined strength and focus gives sustenance to the unknown all the while bringing enduring tolerance into the fold. Blessings to you
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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Hello! So pleased you stopped by and enjoyed your visit. And you are right: the journey is interesting and informative!!! Take Care! diane
Comment from rama devi
An outstanding and very well thought out write. Profound concepts delivered in simple language. I loved the examples in this stanza:
"But to hold onto the past
Is like trying to hold on
To mirror's reflection
Or fallen tears
And I've done that far too often
All these many years"
Love the Lao Tzu quote to set the tone and theme. Your voice is pensive and purposeful.
I loved this and find nothing to change.
Good luck in contest!
Warm regards,
rama devi
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An outstanding and very well thought out write. Profound concepts delivered in simple language. I loved the examples in this stanza:
"But to hold onto the past
Is like trying to hold on
To mirror's reflection
Or fallen tears
And I've done that far too often
All these many years"
Love the Lao Tzu quote to set the tone and theme. Your voice is pensive and purposeful.
I loved this and find nothing to change.
Good luck in contest!
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
Comment from mmichelle97219
It is a good poem, Mrs. KT. I thought your style and interpretation of the picture are just perfect. It is original, creative, and yet has a theme we can relate to. Well done.
Michelle
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It is a good poem, Mrs. KT. I thought your style and interpretation of the picture are just perfect. It is original, creative, and yet has a theme we can relate to. Well done.
Michelle
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
Comment from Earthwriter
very nice my friend i really like your writing style and the presentation of this piece was outstanding no errors could i find
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very nice my friend i really like your writing style and the presentation of this piece was outstanding no errors could i find
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
Comment from VLee
Mrs. KT
"Driving the Distance", is a great work
"OF" art. Your years of teaching and
helping others shine through in your
poetic work. Very enjoyable reading. VLee
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Mrs. KT
"Driving the Distance", is a great work
"OF" art. Your years of teaching and
helping others shine through in your
poetic work. Very enjoyable reading. VLee
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
Comment from PrincessinPurple
The poem seems fine, I don't see any reason for revision. I feel like that this is saying that we should go and do something new.
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The poem seems fine, I don't see any reason for revision. I feel like that this is saying that we should go and do something new.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
