Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Aspirations"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Go your way and find peace. Whatever the conflict be-put it behind you and forget it. Look to a bright future. I see someone named Charles in your future. Betty
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Go your way and find peace. Whatever the conflict be-put it behind you and forget it. Look to a bright future. I see someone named Charles in your future. Betty
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you Betty ... charles ??
Comment from Njorgensen
Fine rendition of one of the plights that afflicts man. It is a all too often overlooked part of our society, so I applaud you for giving it a voice. I like the way this poem is written. Very well done.
Nancy
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Fine rendition of one of the plights that afflicts man. It is a all too often overlooked part of our society, so I applaud you for giving it a voice. I like the way this poem is written. Very well done.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you Nancy
Comment from Leigh Ann
"...bend to the ever moving passage of time." I felt that line. I enjoyed reading this. The flow, the color, the intriging questions. I found myself searching for the answers to the questions you've asked. Great writing. Leigh
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"...bend to the ever moving passage of time." I felt that line. I enjoyed reading this. The flow, the color, the intriging questions. I found myself searching for the answers to the questions you've asked. Great writing. Leigh
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you Leigh Ann
Comment from Aletheia
An internal conflict indeed. Does this man base his future on his past. Is his character judged by the impression another person has of him or does he move on and create his own character. So many of us are haunted by our past, but we have a choice to take those negative experiences and learn from them or stay stuck in the same place. I always say that most of us seek peace, but do we ever really get it? Another thought provoking and meaningful write! Well done! B
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An internal conflict indeed. Does this man base his future on his past. Is his character judged by the impression another person has of him or does he move on and create his own character. So many of us are haunted by our past, but we have a choice to take those negative experiences and learn from them or stay stuck in the same place. I always say that most of us seek peace, but do we ever really get it? Another thought provoking and meaningful write! Well done! B
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you B
Comment from Mastery
Hi, GW...Is this photo of you and your child or you and your father perhaps? The poem s very stirring and emotionally charged....Bob
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Hi, GW...Is this photo of you and your child or you and your father perhaps? The poem s very stirring and emotionally charged....Bob
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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Thanks bob yes dad and my sister back in the 40's
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am not sure how I missed this. It should have come in my PM's. I am glad I caught it on the front page. Life's journey, we just keep trudging along.
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I am not sure how I missed this. It should have come in my PM's. I am glad I caught it on the front page. Life's journey, we just keep trudging along.
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you Barbara
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
Aspirations = desires,longings, ambitions. I'm a little at a loss as to what the message is here. Perhaps if a man is convinced his desires are unattainable, he may as well give up trying. i don't know.
Duane
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deepwater,
Aspirations = desires,longings, ambitions. I'm a little at a loss as to what the message is here. Perhaps if a man is convinced his desires are unattainable, he may as well give up trying. i don't know.
Duane
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thanks for reading
Comment from words
You raise some interesting questions here:
Will this soul of a man be judged by the heart of his partner?
If true, what outcome can benefit from this finding?
Would he stand as stone on principles
I don't think that we have much choice here:Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey
The journey goes on no matter what we wish.
reply by the author on 13-May-2010
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You raise some interesting questions here:
Will this soul of a man be judged by the heart of his partner?
If true, what outcome can benefit from this finding?
Would he stand as stone on principles
I don't think that we have much choice here:Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey
The journey goes on no matter what we wish.
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thanks for reading words but you do have a choice
Comment from c_lucas
The first step in the peace process is forgiving yourself. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
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The first step in the peace process is forgiving yourself. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
Comment Written 13-May-2010
reply by the author on 13-May-2010
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Thank you C,
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of reflective poetry. The poem is well written but the language hides the meaning you intended. The arrangement of lines is beautiful. cheers
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This is a nice piece of reflective poetry. The poem is well written but the language hides the meaning you intended. The arrangement of lines is beautiful. cheers
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you Perp
