Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Frozen Fire
First of all, I have to say I love your title, and the subject is powerful. You've penned, in a very professional way, an accurate account of feelings one of our soldiers on leave may have. Great job with the meter and flow as well!
Shirley
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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First of all, I have to say I love your title, and the subject is powerful. You've penned, in a very professional way, an accurate account of feelings one of our soldiers on leave may have. Great job with the meter and flow as well!
Shirley
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Nicki_Mist
The farmers deserve this tribute to them for growing food for all of us and so many have died out in the fields through storms or accidents and not made it back home. It's nice to know when the farmer has made his peace with God though. Wonderful poem.
Nicole
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The farmers deserve this tribute to them for growing food for all of us and so many have died out in the fields through storms or accidents and not made it back home. It's nice to know when the farmer has made his peace with God though. Wonderful poem.
Nicole
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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thanks for reading
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your free verse with random rhymes. I especially admired your "anchor" metaphor and "fields" personification. Your final lines are quite powerful as well.
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I enjoyed your free verse with random rhymes. I especially admired your "anchor" metaphor and "fields" personification. Your final lines are quite powerful as well.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
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thank you joan
Comment from Pili Pubul
You have such a wonderful talent and depth to express yourself poem about the sad reality of war and the inner feelings of having to confront it first hand.
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You have such a wonderful talent and depth to express yourself poem about the sad reality of war and the inner feelings of having to confront it first hand.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
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Thanks Pili
Comment from fictionwriter
Field of stone seems to have more than one meaning here. I hate the wars and what that means for families, especially when you never see that soldier alive again. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Field of stone seems to have more than one meaning here. I hate the wars and what that means for families, especially when you never see that soldier alive again. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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thank you
Comment from amada
I like the rhyming of this work, it has a special musicallity to it. When you talk about the stones is seems it touching a part of my life.
Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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I like the rhyming of this work, it has a special musicallity to it. When you talk about the stones is seems it touching a part of my life.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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thank you
Comment from Oatmeal
deepwater,
Well chosen theme. The flow was nice. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
It is completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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deepwater,
Well chosen theme. The flow was nice. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
It is completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Judi
deepwater: He is getting ever closer -- it's in the air, it's in the heart -- it's everywhere if you but look.
Wonderfully written, and and so insightful. Judi
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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deepwater: He is getting ever closer -- it's in the air, it's in the heart -- it's everywhere if you but look.
Wonderfully written, and and so insightful. Judi
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello deepwater
I ask myself more then once why do we have to at times walk on a field of unwanted stones
You have expressed your thought with deep emotion.
Like your rhyming.
Gert
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Hello deepwater
I ask myself more then once why do we have to at times walk on a field of unwanted stones
You have expressed your thought with deep emotion.
Like your rhyming.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Josipher32
deepwater,
"Fields of Stone" was a very well written poem. I look forward to reading more of your work! There was great imagery invoved.
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deepwater,
"Fields of Stone" was a very well written poem. I look forward to reading more of your work! There was great imagery invoved.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you
