Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The promise given"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from thequillman
I thought your message was clear and moving. " The mind wins with strength of truth, or loses with judgements and lies." A very powerful truth expressed in this line. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for writing. Keep sharing, well done.
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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I thought your message was clear and moving. " The mind wins with strength of truth, or loses with judgements and lies." A very powerful truth expressed in this line. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for writing. Keep sharing, well done.
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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thank you thequillman
Comment from Ann Smith
The wedding ceremony is a beautiful thing but the true test of marriage is day to day. I like how you broke down the different areas of commitment and used the body parts to illustrate it. The two shall become one, steadfast and sure like an oak tree. ann
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The wedding ceremony is a beautiful thing but the true test of marriage is day to day. I like how you broke down the different areas of commitment and used the body parts to illustrate it. The two shall become one, steadfast and sure like an oak tree. ann
Comment Written 10-May-2010
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thank you ann for reading
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Great piece of work, Gary. I found powerful emotions and thought provoking words here.
The soul the allusive butterfly so frail without the heart and mind,
The temple your body is given freely in love, or taken in whim or revenge>>loved these two lines.
Well done,
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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Great piece of work, Gary. I found powerful emotions and thought provoking words here.
The soul the allusive butterfly so frail without the heart and mind,
The temple your body is given freely in love, or taken in whim or revenge>>loved these two lines.
Well done,
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 09-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from spiceydog
This is a strong statement of principles. You set up a nice contrast within each line; effectively demonstrating how drastically different outcomes result based on our heart's generosity of spirit or selfish insecurity. Very nicely done.
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This is a strong statement of principles. You set up a nice contrast within each line; effectively demonstrating how drastically different outcomes result based on our heart's generosity of spirit or selfish insecurity. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 09-May-2010
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thank you spiceydog
Comment from fictionwriter
Some people really don't think like that anymore. I feel the same way. Once married, that is a commitment that I feel strongly about. Great job.
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Some people really don't think like that anymore. I feel the same way. Once married, that is a commitment that I feel strongly about. Great job.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you Fictionwriter
Comment from Oatmeal
deepwater,
The theme was well chosen. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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deepwater,
The theme was well chosen. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you oatmeal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's amazing how many people don't understand faith and sacrifice, or patience for that matter. I'd like to also through in unconditional love. You wrote a wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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It's amazing how many people don't understand faith and sacrifice, or patience for that matter. I'd like to also through in unconditional love. You wrote a wonderful poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you barbara
Comment from Nicki_Mist
A beautiful wedding vow and what we should be like in marriage and in taking our vows. You are on a role tonight writing all these love poems with so much meaning to them. Very beautiful and full of wisdom.
Hugs, Nicole
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A beautiful wedding vow and what we should be like in marriage and in taking our vows. You are on a role tonight writing all these love poems with so much meaning to them. Very beautiful and full of wisdom.
Hugs, Nicole
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you nicki for reading this
Comment from c_lucas
I would imagine the Promise is the wedding vow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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I would imagine the Promise is the wedding vow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
Comment Written 07-May-2010
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thank you C for reading
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Pili Pubul
I don't have six stars, but it deserve all the celestial stars, it is a philosophical gift to the reader, that is written with clarity and art, a treasure to remember.
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
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I don't have six stars, but it deserve all the celestial stars, it is a philosophical gift to the reader, that is written with clarity and art, a treasure to remember.
Comment Written 07-May-2010
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
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thank you Pili for your warm comments
