Comment from melyuki

Excellent

oh me oh my where does my big sis get her thrillers from. you are one suprise after another you are.. well done and no, of course , who would have guessed, not me that is more sure. you gotta hand it to this writer, she's a smart son ofa bitch you know.. always has something sneeky up her sleeve. hugs to you sis, luv melxxxxxxxxx good onexxxx

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 11-May-2010

Sis,

You are asking me where I come up with these ideas...Just look inside my closet and find all the skeletons hidden there. lol Sis

Comment from bayoupoet

Excellent

This is great! You nailed it in such a short piece and it caught my interest and held it throughout. I never would have guessed the conclusion. Well done, Carol!
sandra

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 11-May-2010

Sandra,

Thanks so much for all the encouragement and kind comments. Smiles, CArol

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Wow I sense the susoence, mystery drom the being to the end of your story
this had ny attentin in fact one time I thought he was going to accidentally kill Tommy.
I have on question is the next vitim the passenger?"

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 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 11-May-2010

Cookie,

Thanks again as always, Carol

reply by misscookie on 12-May-2010

You are very welcome.