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5/7/5 (Leaves in Fright)

Leaves float back to tree, so frightened.

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Comment from w.j.debi
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Oh what a spooky thought. Leaves so frightened that they jump back onto trees is quite original. Happy Halloween and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the 5/7/5 form
I like the humor of falling leaves jumping back onto the tree because they're so scared by the frightful events of Halloween :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Poetofheart2013
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A very short and good poem about how the leaves look
when they falling and I also thought was cool you added
Hallowen too.
Well done

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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Oh, this one made me smile .... it shouldn't, being horror 'n' all, but it did!

Very original and clever!

Best wishes for the contest - I loved this one!!

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Gungalo
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'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright

LOL I guess it was a sight to see. Those leaves jumping back onto the trees because they were scared to death.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Nice poem. 5-7-5. You made the rules. Great subject about my favorite time of the year. Leaves are turning here in the hills. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Sweetiepie22
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Must be some dreadful fright to make the leaves
turn tail and run...! Reminds me of the trees in the forest in The Wizard of Oz! Now THEY were frightening.
Really excellent job here. Even gave me shivers wondering about that special fright.
Karen

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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    Use your imagination. . .and thanks for reading.
Comment from annatberry
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Very creative and good is your poem. You did a great job with few words. The picture displayed your poem really well. Good job on this.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Terror2s
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What a cute interpretation of the twirling leaves on a breezy Halloween evening. This is a terrific photo too. Thanks for sharing. T2

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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Comment from Lily Y
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What a cute little Halloween piece. Good luck with the writing prompt. I think this fit it perfectly. Interesting idea, creative and well fitting execution and artwork. Great job on this poem. Keep writing!-Lily

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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