Tiny Tales of Terror
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Comment from barkingdog
Frankie's just lucky that he made it back inside. He was almost an evening snack. ha-ha.
Great dialogue. You channeled the kid in you.
I don't now about the sounds on a blackboard being gravely. They were more screechy scratchy; always made my teeth hurt and hairs raise on my arms.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Frankie's just lucky that he made it back inside. He was almost an evening snack. ha-ha.
Great dialogue. You channeled the kid in you.
I don't now about the sounds on a blackboard being gravely. They were more screechy scratchy; always made my teeth hurt and hairs raise on my arms.
:) e
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Those were the words I was searching my tired brain for...scratchy and screechy. Thanks, BD, I'll get right on it.
Much obliged for the review. :)
~Dean
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Glad to be of assistance.
Speaking of scratchy and screechy(great segue lol), how was your check up?
:) e
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It went okay. There's a bit of a blockage in one of the arteries in my neck they are kind of concerned about. I was prescribed more meds to thin the blood and help get rid of it. It explains why I get so tired sometimes, just out of the blue. Lack of oxygen to the brain will do that to you I'm told, LOL...
Thanks for asking! ~Dean :)
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No bleeding allowed. You'll have to cut out those knifes and forks. They were giving you indigestion anyway.
Seriously though. They're taking care of the blockage. Then another check up. Not a bad racket--that doctor stuff.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, dean, remind me never to play hide and seek at your house. you got some spookies going on there, lol. I enjoyed reading this one....
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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this is an excellent write, dean, remind me never to play hide and seek at your house. you got some spookies going on there, lol. I enjoyed reading this one....
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Ha-ha, thanks, Pam. I very much appreciate the review.
Oh, by the way...never play hide & side at my house, okay? It just isn't safe, heh-heh...
You have been reminded, and warned.
~Dean
