What is love
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Comment from sunnilicious
This is a wonderful poem. I can tell from reading your poem that you are very expressive and passionate. The end should grow stronger with love and commitment. Believing in a partner/relationship/union also means taking initiatives to make the love/sex relationship work. Good luck to you. Peace.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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This is a wonderful poem. I can tell from reading your poem that you are very expressive and passionate. The end should grow stronger with love and commitment. Believing in a partner/relationship/union also means taking initiatives to make the love/sex relationship work. Good luck to you. Peace.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'What is Love'- this is a lovely poem that speaks volume.
It rhymes.
My favorite lines are: 'but love for me, while on my own
would just be words, and left unknown
love is work, with good pay
love is found every day'
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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'What is Love'- this is a lovely poem that speaks volume.
It rhymes.
My favorite lines are: 'but love for me, while on my own
would just be words, and left unknown
love is work, with good pay
love is found every day'
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, it was words such as these that gave me enough up and go to start posting****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your moving poem about love. You have described a love full of life's curvy roads. We often find that our love is a growing organism that needs to be tended and cared for. Your poem is a gentle reminder with its flow, rhythm and rhyme,
~patty~
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Thank you for sharing your moving poem about love. You have described a love full of life's curvy roads. We often find that our love is a growing organism that needs to be tended and cared for. Your poem is a gentle reminder with its flow, rhythm and rhyme,
~patty~
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Wow, (love is a growing organism that needs to be tendered and cared for) I will definitely read your work, thank you Mustangpatty1029 exceptional, please continue with your words I look forward****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
All dimensions, in most aspects of love in our living as need, feeling, growth, caring , rearing, giving, sacrificing and it is redefined, shown, expressed so simply, I liked and enjoyed the lovely read.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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All dimensions, in most aspects of love in our living as need, feeling, growth, caring , rearing, giving, sacrificing and it is redefined, shown, expressed so simply, I liked and enjoyed the lovely read.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much, love is simple if love is true****kahpot
Comment from Bucketlist
That's why I love communicating on this site. Your poem expresses, in depth, how love benefits, or is ruined by us. I've never seen (until now) a poem about love, that wasn't the usual path of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job, thank you for writing and sharing your poem.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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That's why I love communicating on this site. Your poem expresses, in depth, how love benefits, or is ruined by us. I've never seen (until now) a poem about love, that wasn't the usual path of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job, thank you for writing and sharing your poem.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Thank you and communication on this site is great if I had not discovered I would not be game****kahpot
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No problem !
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, wonderfully fluid rhyming - the truths expressed are relevant and address life in meaningful chronology. Imaginative in its construction and smooth lyricism...
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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In my opinion, wonderfully fluid rhyming - the truths expressed are relevant and address life in meaningful chronology. Imaginative in its construction and smooth lyricism...
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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I thank you very much, as in lyrics is the only way I know...kahpot
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You are most welcome...
Comment from Wabigoon
Kahpot--
I really like this and agree with your definition of "love" to a large degree. What I have trouble with is you opening the poem with "Whilst!" What? Where does that come from? What century are we in? Are you on the Elizabethian stage with a Shakespeare speech on your tongue. "Whilst?" Please! This is, unfortunately the Twentieth Century, and poetry, kicking and screaming, has been dragged into it. Please join the Twentieth Century. Poetry will forgive you, actually love you.
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Wabigoon/Jeff
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Kahpot--
I really like this and agree with your definition of "love" to a large degree. What I have trouble with is you opening the poem with "Whilst!" What? Where does that come from? What century are we in? Are you on the Elizabethian stage with a Shakespeare speech on your tongue. "Whilst?" Please! This is, unfortunately the Twentieth Century, and poetry, kicking and screaming, has been dragged into it. Please join the Twentieth Century. Poetry will forgive you, actually love you.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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thank you Wabigoon, I have checked on the word whilst, something I have not done before, and I thoroughly agree with you, I will try to correct this, and once again I thank you for your attention....kahpot
