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Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "The Right Wife"
Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings

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Comment from Eternal Muse
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This is such a happy poem, and I liked your collage of pictures. You did indeed have a happy life, the right companion for a wife, all these wonderful relatives - this is indeed a person's true wealth, not monetary things. Well, they can't hurt either (lol).

I wish you luck in the contest with this very special poem, and happy holidays!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    Thank you Very Much for the Reading, Rating and The Time to Review this poem offering. Blessings and Happy Holidays
Comment from lori sue weniger
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So true! You picked the right woman! And your poem accurately depicts this truism! We may have the bumps or bumblings, but need the right person to help us through it all! Perhaps changing the word "our" to "this" or "my" as she is accompanying you in the next line. I do see the other side of the use of "our" as in your combined one life together too, but as she's accompanying you it's as though the first line is just about you. Either way, the poem's meaning of support though turmoil is clear.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the Review and Suggestions, the subject in the first line was only about myself Happy Holidays.