Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is a very inspirational poem. It made me feel inspired by feeling good about myself. I like your inspiring poem. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you Sir, It's Great to know the appeal of a poem offering is meaningful within the poetry community here. Blessings and I very Honored.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Beautifully written my friend, you've created a great impression of the most outstanding achievements a human can display. To love God with every fibre of our being, and each other, most know only in God can we achieve this. Well done, great post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Mr. Owen, Blessings and Thank you for your Continued Support and Instructive poetry writings. God Bless you.

reply by royowen on 06-Feb-2021

Well done

Comment from lancellot

Good

Okay, I think get the overall meaning but I'm sorry, some lines are very confusing and it seems to jump around. I would suggest really looking this one over.

notes:

Yet everyday ) Everyone's Losing each of these three,

- is this word needed here?

Let's not abandon any poor {Soul's} brushing them aside

- should this be possessive?

when in our search it's not our [Church Rot] it finds?

- what does this mean?

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for the Review, the three are hearts, souls, and minds in the line above, Souls is possive for emphasis of more than one person's involvement in formenting the chaos. Church Rot is means they are losing their religious teachings to another placed before God. Thanks again. Blessings to you.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have written a very eloquent and meaningful verse. The dramatization of the artwork is unique and sets the stage for the war that wages over our own souls. Well done and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for your Review, Reading, Rating, and Comments.
Blessings to you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Learning to love ourselves and forgiving ourselves is key to loving others and I enjoyed your uplifting words here as your poem is ideal for the faith contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you Ms. Dolly for your Rating, Review, and Reading this poem offering. Blessings to you.