Joy Within
A Diatelle for the contest3 total reviews
Comment from PENofFIRE
Love your poem. The rhyming is perfect. You tell the story of your expecting birth so well. I can actually feel you joy. You chose your words well. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Love your poem. The rhyming is perfect. You tell the story of your expecting birth so well. I can actually feel you joy. You chose your words well. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from LisaMay
You've handled that difficult rhyming scheme very well and delivered an upbeat poem about the joy of impending motherhood, with a baby boy. Good idea to knock off the alcohol.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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You've handled that difficult rhyming scheme very well and delivered an upbeat poem about the joy of impending motherhood, with a baby boy. Good idea to knock off the alcohol.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts - it is a challenging format. I just focused on inner joy and ended up with a pregnant piece! lol
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Pregnant with the potential to win the contest perhaps.
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lol
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
I mean, there's so much fun in the actual shape of this poem- which is obviously intentional. Never seen that before, it's pretty cool as a format.
"Hold the gin"- great choice of line.
Good luck
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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I mean, there's so much fun in the actual shape of this poem- which is obviously intentional. Never seen that before, it's pretty cool as a format.
"Hold the gin"- great choice of line.
Good luck
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts!