Spring Freeze
A lune for the contest4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Well done, my friend! I think your graphic was well chosen and I like the way you presented the coming of spring! Winter often does linger, especially up North!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
Well done, my friend! I think your graphic was well chosen and I like the way you presented the coming of spring! Winter often does linger, especially up North!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from C2
While this contest was full of solid entries, I believe this piece rises above the rest. Great photo of frozen blooms and an eloquent metaphor for winter's encore! Very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
While this contest was full of solid entries, I believe this piece rises above the rest. Great photo of frozen blooms and an eloquent metaphor for winter's encore! Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you do much for sharing your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from RodG
We just had a sample of Winter's one more performance. You convey your message well, but does Winter do the "granting"? I suggest rephrasing line two as "Winter gets" or Winter has" one last performance.
We just had a sample of Winter's one more performance. You convey your message well, but does Winter do the "granting"? I suggest rephrasing line two as "Winter gets" or Winter has" one last performance.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
So true, here, for sure. We always have an Easter freeze. Your lune is in great form, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading it. Great job with your word choices, syllable count, image, and message. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
So true, here, for sure. We always have an Easter freeze. Your lune is in great form, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading it. Great job with your word choices, syllable count, image, and message. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you!