Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyed reading about the "divine" love that you and your wonderful wife. Those of us with lifelong spouses are especially blessed to share such a love. Great job with your mono-rhymed quatrains.

Spelling Comments:
You're warmth can be so Devine! (Your ... Divine)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Thank you for your Review, Support and that spelling slip. Greatly Appreciated will revise shortly. Blessings

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I enjoyed this presentation filled with such appreciation, love and gratitude for your mate. I enjoyed the picture as well as your writing and the author's notes. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You are certainly inspired by someone precious in your life here and I have four grandchildren who bring sunshine into my life and I know that feeling, much enjoyed, an uplifting write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021

Thanks for your Support and Review. Growing up as a preteen I notice was a big party guy and saw many friends both female and male getting pregnant at an age before I thought was too early so I really wanted someone completely opposite of myself. Luckily I was able to as they say find the right girl. Blessings to you and Thank you for your Continued Support.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

QC Poet:

First, I need to ask you what does dwine mean - or was that just a typo? I enjoyed your Sunshine poem written for the contest in the Sunshine Challenge hosted by the "Fabulous Free-Versers Club." Good luck in the contest.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Thanks for your Review and Support. Note 1.
1. Dwine; (noun) the state or action of waning or failing.
(verb); to (cause to) decline, or fade away.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and beautifully written poem about the sunshine of your life. You used very nice, loving and descriptive words with beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Thanks for your Support and Review. Blessings to you and yours.