Purple Passion
Flower of Love5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Purple Passion, has the right set up and notes the exotic look of this blossom of the passion fruit. Nice......
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
This 3-5-3, Purple Passion, has the right set up and notes the exotic look of this blossom of the passion fruit. Nice......
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the
topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-There is an upbeat mood
and good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the
topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-There is an upbeat mood
and good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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You are welcome.
Comment from R.E.R.
Beautiful color description in this poem! I like the image you chose- it pairs nicely with the content. I feel like I can almost smell the flowers! Very nice haiku :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
Beautiful color description in this poem! I like the image you chose- it pairs nicely with the content. I feel like I can almost smell the flowers! Very nice haiku :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wonderful poem:"Lovely sight
Purple passion bright
Tasty fruit " - this is the life that starts a new. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
Wonderful poem:"Lovely sight
Purple passion bright
Tasty fruit " - this is the life that starts a new. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Very pretty photo and I like the purple background. Looks inviting! You have used very few words to make the most appealing poem. Beautiful work! Is this about the passion fruit we sometimes see in the market?
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Very pretty photo and I like the purple background. Looks inviting! You have used very few words to make the most appealing poem. Beautiful work! Is this about the passion fruit we sometimes see in the market?
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your review. This is the flower that is seen with the passionfruit, too bitter for my taste.