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A Pleiades poem

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Comment from Sharon Davis
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I appreciate the directive advanced by this pleiades poem...a call to re-evaluate all that one can achieve in a world that is theirs to explore. A reassessment of one's place in the world, at whatever stage in life, is a useful and potentially inspiring exercise. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you so very much, your comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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by kahpot

Hello, Kym,

Great Pleiades poem about positive thinking is very wise. You followed the Pleiades poetic form well. I like the presentation :)

gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you, I enjoyed trying this form and am overwhelmed with the response, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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I love it. Anything to do with revitalization is tops on my list. Never give up is my motto. We have so much time to reinvent and start again, that there should never be any doubt about what we are capable of.

Ralf

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, yes we should always try to test ourselves, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
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Lovely poem that is meant to inspire and motivate. This could be my daily mantra. I might have to read this every morning as I drink my java, to get my creative juices flowing! Very nice. I think it is suited for teenagers (who often need encouragement) and adults, alike. Thank you so much for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, yes I am sure we can continue to set-reset goals, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
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What a great inspirational Pleiades poem! Not only does each word begin with "R" but it begins with "Re" and that prefix means "again." How often in life, we have to "reset, revive, restructure" ourselves. Thanks for REminding us!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, yes we must continue to have goals, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork
and presentation, Kahpot.
-A good title and poem.
-You make many good points
about reclaiming your life:
"restore your dreams" and
"restrain the thought of "I cannot"
-A good concluding line, too.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Apr-2021
    You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Yes! Revitalize, revive and reset. Sometimes older age brings along with a grump disposition, and that most certainly does not help maintain that enthusiasm.

A fine pleiades poem, kahpot, and a pleasure to read and review today. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, I enjoyed trying this form, and yes we must still have goals, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Oh, this is so true! We are never too old to find things for our lives. Those of us who do are much happier and fulfilled. You have done a great job with this. I was also interested in the form and appreciate the lesson!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, it was fun trying to nut this form out, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Sherry Asbury on 26-Apr-2021
Comment from sunnilicious
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Nice artwork choice. This was a nice Pleiades. Good visual imagery created. Good advice given. Good resonance with RE at the start of every sentence. Nice lyrical flow. Good work :)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you, I enjoyed having a go at this form, as always your comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An unusual and uplifting write, very inventive and I enjoyed the sentiments here, it is never too late to be positive and have faith in tomorrow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, I enjoyed trying this form, as always very much appreciated****kahpot