Speaking My Language
2-6-2 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
LeAnn,
Congrats on your 1st place triple the on this 2-6-2. I think that's what I saw. I thought I would review since it's showing up as a four star poem.
I really can identify with the message within as I lived in the Netherlands for almost 3 years.
You met the challenge well and I'm happy you were rewarded with the ribbon.
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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LeAnn,
Congrats on your 1st place triple the on this 2-6-2. I think that's what I saw. I thought I would review since it's showing up as a four star poem.
I really can identify with the message within as I lived in the Netherlands for almost 3 years.
You met the challenge well and I'm happy you were rewarded with the ribbon.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you. I think I got the four star rating because of the picture I originally had with it. It was a dog smiling. The reviewer thought my poem was about dogs. But that's OK. I was happily surprised to tie for first. Thank you so much for your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Susan Newell
This poem is very original and I like the implication of universal body language. I might put a period at the end since the first word is capitalized and it makes a complete sentence.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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This poem is very original and I like the implication of universal body language. I might put a period at the end since the first word is capitalized and it makes a complete sentence.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thank you for the review and for telling me I forgot the period. I appreciate it a lot.
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You are welcome.
Comment from oliver818
That's a nice idea. Language can betray us in so many ways but a real smile is very hard to fake and so it is much more trustworthy. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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That's a nice idea. Language can betray us in so many ways but a real smile is very hard to fake and so it is much more trustworthy. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thank you. A smile in any language is still a smile! Hugs.
Comment from JC Eno
Every dog provides a sense of life, love, and happiness. But say what you feel, put that energy into it. I know with my losses and new pups I have a lot to say. Help others, tell them what emotions you have with animals as they can be very healing.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Every dog provides a sense of life, love, and happiness. But say what you feel, put that energy into it. I know with my losses and new pups I have a lot to say. Help others, tell them what emotions you have with animals as they can be very healing.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you for letting me know that readers may misunderstand the words with the photo of the smiling dog attached. My poem wasn't actually about dogs, but how a smile is the same in any language. I remove the photo. Thank you so much for your review. It was actually very helpful. hugs.
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You have a lot of heart, just tell it in raw form.