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Comment from RGstar
Then it comes back around again. We are thankful for each one, yet, we are always glad to see the back of at least one of them.
Simply said, and point taken.
Have a good Christmas.
RGstar
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Then it comes back around again. We are thankful for each one, yet, we are always glad to see the back of at least one of them.
Simply said, and point taken.
Have a good Christmas.
RGstar
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very true and very well worded poem you have penned about the changing seasons and what comes next. Your words told the story. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
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This is a very true and very well worded poem you have penned about the changing seasons and what comes next. Your words told the story. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from lancellot
Um, while this is true, I don't quite see the poetic form of this general common knowledge statement. I would recommend rethinking this and writing it perhaps in a metaphorical sense or one of the poetic formats.
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Um, while this is true, I don't quite see the poetic form of this general common knowledge statement. I would recommend rethinking this and writing it perhaps in a metaphorical sense or one of the poetic formats.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from mermaids
The seasons always remind me that the one constant in life is change. The seasons change into each other and move life along. Your short poem gives the reader food for thought.
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The seasons always remind me that the one constant in life is change. The seasons change into each other and move life along. Your short poem gives the reader food for thought.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
I give you five stars for the effort you put into your poem. It reads like a one-sentence contest, but I see it is not. The change of the season can be compared to the change of the heart and welfare of people, such as I'm in the Autumn of my life. I feel there is a lot of potential in this poem. I also feel that a picture of some kind would further enhance your poem.
Patty
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I give you five stars for the effort you put into your poem. It reads like a one-sentence contest, but I see it is not. The change of the season can be compared to the change of the heart and welfare of people, such as I'm in the Autumn of my life. I feel there is a lot of potential in this poem. I also feel that a picture of some kind would further enhance your poem.
Patty
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The seasonal change sure goes fast. The Christmas season is upon us. Not only does the season change but also the weather. Today the weather is supposed to be severe here.
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The seasonal change sure goes fast. The Christmas season is upon us. Not only does the season change but also the weather. Today the weather is supposed to be severe here.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from jbrax wilkn
Really don't know what to say but saying is required. Not sure your genre selection is the best. This work seems more like nature commentary maybe. Amazed I am by what promotion will push to top of list but maybe I'm missing deeply hidden message or meaning. If so, perhaps you should consider a clearer approach, or I should find simpler work to review.
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Really don't know what to say but saying is required. Not sure your genre selection is the best. This work seems more like nature commentary maybe. Amazed I am by what promotion will push to top of list but maybe I'm missing deeply hidden message or meaning. If so, perhaps you should consider a clearer approach, or I should find simpler work to review.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting short chapter. Although short, it doesn't need much to describe the role seasons play.
With so few words and minus a season I couldn't help but play around a bit. Feel free to ignore my pondering:
Seasons are getting ready to change, Summer is soon going to change to fall, and then fall is eventually going to change to winter.
Suggestion:
Seasons continually unfold. Summer heat rises to change into fall, and then fall eventually will change to winter with spring creeping around the corner.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is an interesting short chapter. Although short, it doesn't need much to describe the role seasons play.
With so few words and minus a season I couldn't help but play around a bit. Feel free to ignore my pondering:
Seasons are getting ready to change, Summer is soon going to change to fall, and then fall is eventually going to change to winter.
Suggestion:
Seasons continually unfold. Summer heat rises to change into fall, and then fall eventually will change to winter with spring creeping around the corner.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from Sanku
The inevitable cycle of nature. life,growth and finally death and regeneration . This is explainred in your simple poem very well. I have not read the other chapters,but I will try to,
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The inevitable cycle of nature. life,growth and finally death and regeneration . This is explainred in your simple poem very well. I have not read the other chapters,but I will try to,
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
Comment from Wendy G
Very brief, concise, and to the point. I presume you are talking equally about the human life. However I did wonder why Spring does not get a mention.
Wendy
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Very brief, concise, and to the point. I presume you are talking equally about the human life. However I did wonder why Spring does not get a mention.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021