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Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, loneliness is a terrible affliction, it tends to eat away at the soul. It's great enemy is bitterness of soul. Its negative affects spur feelings of rejection and hopelessness, beautifully written, good luck, I will pray. Blessings Roy
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Yes indeed, loneliness is a terrible affliction, it tends to eat away at the soul. It's great enemy is bitterness of soul. Its negative affects spur feelings of rejection and hopelessness, beautifully written, good luck, I will pray. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I live alone, but I am never lonely, perhaps I have become used to doing everything on my own, or maybe I just enjoy my own company. The days never seem to be long enough for me, I have so much to do with very little time. Perhaps you need some hobbies. Sometimes we unwittingly choose to be alone, a poignant write with much sadness, love Dolly x
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I live alone, but I am never lonely, perhaps I have become used to doing everything on my own, or maybe I just enjoy my own company. The days never seem to be long enough for me, I have so much to do with very little time. Perhaps you need some hobbies. Sometimes we unwittingly choose to be alone, a poignant write with much sadness, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
Loneliness is about the worse thing anyone can go through. Yes there are sicknesses and desease but thats different. Loneliness is a feeling of emptiness. It is awful. Thank you for sharing. Dont let life get yiu down.
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Loneliness is about the worse thing anyone can go through. Yes there are sicknesses and desease but thats different. Loneliness is a feeling of emptiness. It is awful. Thank you for sharing. Dont let life get yiu down.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is an effective one-line poem about loneliness. You get right to the point.
I would suggest the following revision, because it improves the grammar:
I trying to deal with the pain of loneliness.
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I'm trying to deal with the pain of loneliness.
I'm sorry that you have the pain of loneliness. You're not the only one who feels this way. I have a cousin who I talk to on the phone frequently, because she's lonely, and my husband has a friend who he speaks to for the same reason.
It seems worse because of the pandemic. A lot of people are simply afraid to socialize, even to stop and say hello on the street, and there are fewer places where people can go to meet others or to be sociable.
Our church now meets online, but at least we have that option. It's better than not meeting at all.
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This is an effective one-line poem about loneliness. You get right to the point.
I would suggest the following revision, because it improves the grammar:
I trying to deal with the pain of loneliness.
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I'm trying to deal with the pain of loneliness.
I'm sorry that you have the pain of loneliness. You're not the only one who feels this way. I have a cousin who I talk to on the phone frequently, because she's lonely, and my husband has a friend who he speaks to for the same reason.
It seems worse because of the pandemic. A lot of people are simply afraid to socialize, even to stop and say hello on the street, and there are fewer places where people can go to meet others or to be sociable.
Our church now meets online, but at least we have that option. It's better than not meeting at all.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Im sorry you are lonely ! You have friends in us my name is Carmen and if you ever need to talk im here for you .Remember you are not alone God walks besides you every day and this my friend will pass ! God Bless you and thank you for sharing this !
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Im sorry you are lonely ! You have friends in us my name is Carmen and if you ever need to talk im here for you .Remember you are not alone God walks besides you every day and this my friend will pass ! God Bless you and thank you for sharing this !
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
Comment from SHABAMO
Hi Brian, I think your poem may not have fully posted, all it is showing is "
I trying to deal with the pain of loneliness." If I'm right, hopefully you'll be able to edit and correct.
- Shabamo
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Hi Brian, I think your poem may not have fully posted, all it is showing is "
I trying to deal with the pain of loneliness." If I'm right, hopefully you'll be able to edit and correct.
- Shabamo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021