Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write as the season only changes certain things in nature and we rely on those colours that remain true to us all year round, much enjoyed Brian, love Dolly x
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A poignant write as the season only changes certain things in nature and we rely on those colours that remain true to us all year round, much enjoyed Brian, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
Comment from Hitcher
The falling of the autumn leaves on the beautiful green grass. Nice!
My apologies Brian, I'm Not sure but it seems like something is missing here.
Or is that your intention, to get us to picture the falling leaves and let our minds wander?
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The falling of the autumn leaves on the beautiful green grass. Nice!
My apologies Brian, I'm Not sure but it seems like something is missing here.
Or is that your intention, to get us to picture the falling leaves and let our minds wander?
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021