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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I don't think you need the apostrophe here Brian. (The devil lies and he deceives). It does not surprise me that lies come from the Devil, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Brian,
What you have written is so very true. It's in his nature to lie and deceive and we need to be aware of his ways. The word says he is like a roaring lion looking for whom he may devour. Thanks for pointing this out.
Blessings.

Tom

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021