Liquified
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Comment from June Sargent
The human family, though born separately, is - or should be - one. All creatures, great and small, have learned to coexist with peace and respect. If man could learn to do this, it would be a much different world. Thank you for these words of wisdom penned in a just a few short lines.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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The human family, though born separately, is - or should be - one. All creatures, great and small, have learned to coexist with peace and respect. If man could learn to do this, it would be a much different world. Thank you for these words of wisdom penned in a just a few short lines.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your insightful review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your nine syllables in this uplifting, expressive piece. If people would truly embrace the concept of universal kinship, there could be peace.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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You have made excellent use of your nine syllables in this uplifting, expressive piece. If people would truly embrace the concept of universal kinship, there could be peace.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very profound statement. Well done to the prompt. I think this is the first two-five-two poem that I have reviewed. It's really hard to write 150 words about such a short piece.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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This is a very profound statement. Well done to the prompt. I think this is the first two-five-two poem that I have reviewed. It's really hard to write 150 words about such a short piece.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from SimianSavant
Pretty good mileage out of a form as short as a 252. A successful play on metaphor and ambiguity. The first thing it brings to mind is water droplets. could also possibly refer to the Earth and the moon, shown in your photo, formed from two separate planets in a violent ancient collision. Or some connection between people. which is it? A question without an answer, as a good poem should be. Thanks for the read
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Pretty good mileage out of a form as short as a 252. A successful play on metaphor and ambiguity. The first thing it brings to mind is water droplets. could also possibly refer to the Earth and the moon, shown in your photo, formed from two separate planets in a violent ancient collision. Or some connection between people. which is it? A question without an answer, as a good poem should be. Thanks for the read
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I don?t know the answer and, thank you for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You have a good message
in your poem that shows
how we are one because
we share space on this
planet together.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You have a good message
in your poem that shows
how we are one because
we share space on this
planet together.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet
You have your first vote!
We are of different breed and creed
and for wealth and power
wars are started.
I believe we will unite the day spaceship descend and aliens attack.
That day MANKIND will become one.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Ciao mystery poet
You have your first vote!
We are of different breed and creed
and for wealth and power
wars are started.
I believe we will unite the day spaceship descend and aliens attack.
That day MANKIND will become one.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Let us hope it takes that long. But then again it may happen tomorrow. Thanks for the review and vote.
Comment from Annmuma
Yours is the first entry I have read, but I can't imagine them getting any better. Excellent subject, presentation, picture, everything!! Good luck in the contest. I'm thinking you have my vote, but to be fair, I must read the others. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Yours is the first entry I have read, but I can't imagine them getting any better. Excellent subject, presentation, picture, everything!! Good luck in the contest. I'm thinking you have my vote, but to be fair, I must read the others. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Almost
....I really hadn't used or were familiar with this type of poetry, I read the details and then your wonderful example. Thank you for a brilliant deep yet general poem.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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....I really hadn't used or were familiar with this type of poetry, I read the details and then your wonderful example. Thank you for a brilliant deep yet general poem.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
Comment from Modee
I have to agree with you on this one. We are pretty much all just a part of the whole world. Personally in our own little homes, but with the picture of the world you chose - we are all of one earth. Yeps...
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I have to agree with you on this one. We are pretty much all just a part of the whole world. Personally in our own little homes, but with the picture of the world you chose - we are all of one earth. Yeps...
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Yes we are. Thank you for your wonderful review.