Try Again Spanky
Murphy's Law in full effect27 total reviews
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
Yes! You have every chance in the world to walk away with first prize!!! An excellent contribution to the world of tongue-in-cheek happiness, even taking into account of flattening that poor cat.... Good belabored rhymes and good smooth rhythm throughout. Congrats!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Yes! You have every chance in the world to walk away with first prize!!! An excellent contribution to the world of tongue-in-cheek happiness, even taking into account of flattening that poor cat.... Good belabored rhymes and good smooth rhythm throughout. Congrats!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Earl, I love humorous poetry and this funny one
hits it out of the ballpark.
The rhyming is exceptional too. I hope you have a splendid week, and may your
pen keep flowing gold.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hi Earl, I love humorous poetry and this funny one
hits it out of the ballpark.
The rhyming is exceptional too. I hope you have a splendid week, and may your
pen keep flowing gold.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much your review pushed this poem to All Time Best Status. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, you certainly wrote of an "interview gone wrong" but more than that it was the dang whole day, wasn't it? Very funny. Where from in Pa.? I was birthed in Manayunk, in Lower NW, a block from the Schuylkill River. Also four years in Levittown, and a short stint at the Philadelphia Navy Yard.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Well, you certainly wrote of an "interview gone wrong" but more than that it was the dang whole day, wasn't it? Very funny. Where from in Pa.? I was birthed in Manayunk, in Lower NW, a block from the Schuylkill River. Also four years in Levittown, and a short stint at the Philadelphia Navy Yard.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I'm from the western side of the state near the Ohio line. I spent a week at the Naval shipyard in 1990. Thanks for reviewing this poem.
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be well. I had kin in E. Liverpool.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were certainly funny, descriptive and creative. I thought about what happens sometimes when your stressed! Having
the wrong date for the interview made me laugh! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is great and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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The author's words were certainly funny, descriptive and creative. I thought about what happens sometimes when your stressed! Having
the wrong date for the interview made me laugh! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is great and compliments these words.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from karenina
Not a little fun...a LOT of fun! It really is Murphy's Law in the giant economy size!
I had to chuckle... then outright laugh! Hah!
Imagine all that and oops, the wrong day!
Great title, by the way!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Not a little fun...a LOT of fun! It really is Murphy's Law in the giant economy size!
I had to chuckle... then outright laugh! Hah!
Imagine all that and oops, the wrong day!
Great title, by the way!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much, Karenina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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I enjoyed it, thoroughly!
Comment from JessicaAshley
Ha! Oh, I really enjoyed this!! I can totally relate to such a frantic, chaotic day and then having an end result like that. You just have to laugh to keep from crying! Nice work.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Ha! Oh, I really enjoyed this!! I can totally relate to such a frantic, chaotic day and then having an end result like that. You just have to laugh to keep from crying! Nice work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
This is pretty funny, but wouldn't be if it was happening to me. I've had Murphy's law happen to me and it sucks. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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This is pretty funny, but wouldn't be if it was happening to me. I've had Murphy's law happen to me and it sucks. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from BethShelby
This is funny. Something like a interview to you all tense and everything goes wrong and all for nothing. Your interview isn't even scheduled for that day. It sounds like some of my days. Disaster comes in clusters.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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This is funny. Something like a interview to you all tense and everything goes wrong and all for nothing. Your interview isn't even scheduled for that day. It sounds like some of my days. Disaster comes in clusters.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much for the six stars. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Job Interview Gone Wrong writing prompt contest.
I had this happen to me. LoL. It's not funny when it happens. Once I drove into a ditch. LoL I made it to the interview though.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Job Interview Gone Wrong writing prompt contest.
I had this happen to me. LoL. It's not funny when it happens. Once I drove into a ditch. LoL I made it to the interview though.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much, Gypsey. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is telling about an interview where the person is in a rush and everything goes wrong after he/she gets out of bed. You arrive, and then it's the wrong date and time. It sounds so nonfiction, doesn't it?
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Your poem is telling about an interview where the person is in a rush and everything goes wrong after he/she gets out of bed. You arrive, and then it's the wrong date and time. It sounds so nonfiction, doesn't it?
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.