Seriously
1 Line Poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Thatguypk
I have to give you six stars for this, for it expresses my feelings about one line poems too. I suppose you might say I'm just goofing around with the reviews, folks. ;-)
PK
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
I have to give you six stars for this, for it expresses my feelings about one line poems too. I suppose you might say I'm just goofing around with the reviews, folks. ;-)
PK
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and big sixer, PK. I'm glad you liked my take on the contest. I really appreciate it, friend. Have yourself a fantastic week.
Comment from Alan Lehrer
This one-liner gets the point across in a very funny way.
When one looks at her face they understand what I mean.
Look at her eyes beaming red and the anger that seems
to come from her mouth.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
This one-liner gets the point across in a very funny way.
When one looks at her face they understand what I mean.
Look at her eyes beaming red and the anger that seems
to come from her mouth.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Alan. Yeah, I was just being silly. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
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Thank you for answering this.
Glad you liked my narration
Comment from Susan Newell
And the hard task is to write a high quality review that includes the requisite number of characters, and finds the metaphors within as the saving grace of this poetic form. Obviously, you are talking about the frustration of not acing a job interview. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
And the hard task is to write a high quality review that includes the requisite number of characters, and finds the metaphors within as the saving grace of this poetic form. Obviously, you are talking about the frustration of not acing a job interview. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Hahaha. Yes, that's it. Lol. Thank you for the hilarious review and stars, Susan. Thank you for the chuckle.
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Whew! I was afraid I'd misunderstood it. :-) welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Seriously, seems to find the challenge of writing one line and calling it a poem as ludicrous. Perhaps the use of *audacity* or a question mark will tilt this interrogative sentence into the winners' column.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
This one-line poem, Seriously, seems to find the challenge of writing one line and calling it a poem as ludicrous. Perhaps the use of *audacity* or a question mark will tilt this interrogative sentence into the winners' column.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Lol. I doubt it. I couldn't help myself. I was just in one of those moods. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I agree, as well as for 2-4-2 and 5-7-5 and anything along those lines. Perhaps it's my verbosity that keeps me from joining in those trite attempts at poetry.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
I agree, as well as for 2-4-2 and 5-7-5 and anything along those lines. Perhaps it's my verbosity that keeps me from joining in those trite attempts at poetry.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Tom. Can't leave out the 1-6-1's either. Lol. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.