Face in the Water
An extraordinary meeting4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You must, or perhaps she was, a fast worker. Up and on board and being kissed before she had time to dry, perhaps, but whatever, I would have taken my time and lost at love, again, I guess.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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You must, or perhaps she was, a fast worker. Up and on board and being kissed before she had time to dry, perhaps, but whatever, I would have taken my time and lost at love, again, I guess.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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One must strike when the iron is hot. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
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story of my life? perhaps.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a romantic story of how you and your wife met. It shows how much you love her and how grateful you are to have her in your live.
The photo matches well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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This is a romantic story of how you and your wife met. It shows how much you love her and how grateful you are to have her in your live.
The photo matches well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Much appreciated.
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You're wlcome, Harry.
Joan
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You did a good job getting your story into those 75 words or less. Nice imagery of a life led with the daughter of Neptune. Best of luck in the 75-word flash contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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You did a good job getting your story into those 75 words or less. Nice imagery of a life led with the daughter of Neptune. Best of luck in the 75-word flash contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word flash fiction story, Face in the Water, has the required word count and tells this out-from-the-water tale of first meeting, first kiss, and worst sunburn (wink wink).
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This seventy-five-word flash fiction story, Face in the Water, has the required word count and tells this out-from-the-water tale of first meeting, first kiss, and worst sunburn (wink wink).
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Yes, sunburn a possibility, the question is where. Double wink and one more.