Even From There
5-7-5 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
It's so sad what we do to ourselves and what we are still doing. If only we could communicate without condemning. I enjoyed your piece. Very thought provoking. It had all the required syllables. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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It's so sad what we do to ourselves and what we are still doing. If only we could communicate without condemning. I enjoyed your piece. Very thought provoking. It had all the required syllables. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the great review, FW. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from JLR
Among the many writings submitted for this 5/7/5 contest, it is my opinion that you have very credibly presented a winner! Whether you win this matters not as much as this is presented obviously from a winning soul! Therefore the rationale for the six stars!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Among the many writings submitted for this 5/7/5 contest, it is my opinion that you have very credibly presented a winner! Whether you win this matters not as much as this is presented obviously from a winning soul! Therefore the rationale for the six stars!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, JLR.
I really appreciate the great rating but moreover, the kind comments. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thank you again.
Comment from Val Crisson
Nice five/seven/five poem entry. I wrote something similar years ago, and I do believe "angels" do mourn our inability to be less destructive. But unfortunately, for us humans we are human and inclined to destruction. Like your touch of alliteration, and the presentation is great.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Nice five/seven/five poem entry. I wrote something similar years ago, and I do believe "angels" do mourn our inability to be less destructive. But unfortunately, for us humans we are human and inclined to destruction. Like your touch of alliteration, and the presentation is great.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Val. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Even From There, has the right setup and suggests that the heavenly hosts will have a soft spot for mankind when the last dog is hung and the fat lady sings.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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This 5-7-5, Even From There, has the right setup and suggests that the heavenly hosts will have a soft spot for mankind when the last dog is hung and the fat lady sings.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Lol. Who knows? Maybe they do, maybe they don't care one way or another seeing as how they're already home. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill.