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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hi Steve, I am so taken in by these kind of stories and yet I am not your usual horror fan. This one was eeerie, scary, and left a lot of imagination for a minute than I realized that the one who missed was her with the bow and arrow. Ouch, this one hurts. Thanks Steve for this entertaining flash fiction and congrats on the win. Reminds me of the one I wrote called Halloween Blizzard that also won the contest for 100 words. I used a little Twilight Zone type ending a couple weeks ago. Anyway I loved it and soon I hope to review more often.
I figured that since this is your unofficial birthday, I would give you an official ATB tonight when the clock strikes 11PM our time, which is midnight NY time.
So thanks again for this fascinating and wonderful piece. , Steve!!! Love, Debi
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Hi Steve, I am so taken in by these kind of stories and yet I am not your usual horror fan. This one was eeerie, scary, and left a lot of imagination for a minute than I realized that the one who missed was her with the bow and arrow. Ouch, this one hurts. Thanks Steve for this entertaining flash fiction and congrats on the win. Reminds me of the one I wrote called Halloween Blizzard that also won the contest for 100 words. I used a little Twilight Zone type ending a couple weeks ago. Anyway I loved it and soon I hope to review more often.
I figured that since this is your unofficial birthday, I would give you an official ATB tonight when the clock strikes 11PM our time, which is midnight NY time.
So thanks again for this fascinating and wonderful piece. , Steve!!! Love, Debi
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debi, for this incredible review and official ATB. You are truly a blessing, my friend. I enjoy these short works and leaving folks of the edge of their seats. I will have to read Halloween Blizzard.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from karenina
I could be clever and say I predict you'll win with this streamlined, mach one, sleek and showy "extreme flash"--
But, alas, I'm reviewing it after the contest and (Ta Da!) you won!
Now, one more review and this will be an All Time Best!
Shazam!
Great write!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I could be clever and say I predict you'll win with this streamlined, mach one, sleek and showy "extreme flash"--
But, alas, I'm reviewing it after the contest and (Ta Da!) you won!
Now, one more review and this will be an All Time Best!
Shazam!
Great write!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Are you physic? If so, please tell me next weeks winning powerball numbers, lol.
Thank you for another great review, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
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If only! I wish I knew the winning numbers....
I'd be happy to share!
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I guess we just have to keep trying, lol.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I would not change a single thing. It is absolutely beautific, clever, dangerous, excellent, fearfilled, gently horrific. It is intellegent, jittery, keen, lively, magnificent, noteworthy, off-the-wall, and perfect.
I we you one. :-)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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I would not change a single thing. It is absolutely beautific, clever, dangerous, excellent, fearfilled, gently horrific. It is intellegent, jittery, keen, lively, magnificent, noteworthy, off-the-wall, and perfect.
I we you one. :-)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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This is the best review EVER! You have stumbled across one of my favorites, Mind Games, which I love to read over and over. I will retire at the age of sixty-two. I'll turn sixty in October. I will become a recluse and write myself into oblivion, lol.
Thank you, Karen, for making my night.
Fair warning: I like your work and will continue backtracking.
God bless,
Steve
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:-)
Comment from JoannaN
Wow. This is such a gripping story, and it is written only in a hundred words. Your flash fiction is dynamic and well described. A good job. Indeed, an extreme Flash fiction.
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Wow. This is such a gripping story, and it is written only in a hundred words. Your flash fiction is dynamic and well described. A good job. Indeed, an extreme Flash fiction.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you for this outstanding review, my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from royowen
I think this is a darn good entry in this flash fiction contest, the ending always needs to be a surprise, mild or otherwise and this is certainly that, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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I think this is a darn good entry in this flash fiction contest, the ending always needs to be a surprise, mild or otherwise and this is certainly that, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you, Roy. I enjoyed crafting this little piece.
God bless!
Comment from John Ciarmello
I enjoyed this; if I have it right, her husband missed her with the fatal arrow, and she killed him as he walked through the door. Nice! I wish you much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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I enjoyed this; if I have it right, her husband missed her with the fatal arrow, and she killed him as he walked through the door. Nice! I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you, John. I had fun with this one.
God bless
Comment from LJbutterfly
Yay! She got him. This story is very dramatic and descriptive, making it easy to visualize. It builds in suspense, with a satisfying ending. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Yay! She got him. This story is very dramatic and descriptive, making it easy to visualize. It builds in suspense, with a satisfying ending. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for this excellent review. I love the attention it's getting lol.
God bless
Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. Looks like your going to win the contest. Good luck! No grammatical errors. It was fun reading it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. Looks like your going to win the contest. Good luck! No grammatical errors. It was fun reading it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you, Raul. I loved the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, it is a captivating story but 100 words cannot do it justice. How did she get stab? When? And what happened at the end? Did she hit dead-center? Questions, left to the imagination.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Well, it is a captivating story but 100 words cannot do it justice. How did she get stab? When? And what happened at the end? Did she hit dead-center? Questions, left to the imagination.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you, Tom. I appreciate the great review and stars. I may have to dig into this one myself and see where it goes.
God bless
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Loved this one. She got him back good and proper!! He should have made sure he'd killed her before he went to the bathroom!!!! Lol. Good for her, lovely twist at the end. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Loved this one. She got him back good and proper!! He should have made sure he'd killed her before he went to the bathroom!!!! Lol. Good for her, lovely twist at the end. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra. I enjoyed crafting this challenging little piece. Love the stars and excellent review.
God bless