Feeling Lucky
One small step for mankind...15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I can not figure out how this one did not win. It was beautiful. I especially liked this paragraph:
We walk hand in hand into a glade dappled in gold and tan by shafts of light provided by God himself.
Oh yes, another number fifteen! Congratulations!
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I can not figure out how this one did not win. It was beautiful. I especially liked this paragraph:
We walk hand in hand into a glade dappled in gold and tan by shafts of light provided by God himself.
Oh yes, another number fifteen! Congratulations!
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Simple like that :"I do!" But do you know what you signed up for? I guess depending on your luck:) could be the Jack pot or hell-eluja:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Simple like that :"I do!" But do you know what you signed up for? I guess depending on your luck:) could be the Jack pot or hell-eluja:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Love is a many splendor things.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Tom, Ahhh. An old-fasioned love story. How nice and refreshing. I especially liked:
Assured, I kneel, ring in hand, and pop the question. You respond, "I will."
(And the rest is history.)
Well done. This story made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Hello Tom, Ahhh. An old-fasioned love story. How nice and refreshing. I especially liked:
Assured, I kneel, ring in hand, and pop the question. You respond, "I will."
(And the rest is history.)
Well done. This story made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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a newbie needs more than luck. They need to establish a report with the old timers who know the ins and outs of what to write and they support each other.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet story you told in few words, Tom. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words were well thought out and created
great imagery. The image worked well, too. The dialogue
carried the story.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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What a sweet story you told in few words, Tom. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words were well thought out and created
great imagery. The image worked well, too. The dialogue
carried the story.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Tom. You did an outstanding job on our short story. I love the romance and the exquisite ending that makes everything seem alright in this world. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Hello Tom. You did an outstanding job on our short story. I love the romance and the exquisite ending that makes everything seem alright in this world. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I really thought it could win compared to the other entrants. I simply do not have the following. Thanks for following me.
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, Being Lucky, has the proper word count and finds the speaker in the right place for the apt question and the best outcome.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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This seventy-five-word story, Being Lucky, has the proper word count and finds the speaker in the right place for the apt question and the best outcome.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Great. I read the others. I felt sure this would be #. Even as it was "Recognized" I have 2 votes.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt contest. A romantic marriage proposal.
Paree or Paris?
It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear picture...
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt contest. A romantic marriage proposal.
Paree or Paris?
It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear picture...
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Gat Paree in my mind is one and the same. Thank you.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
My guess is that luck didn't have much to do with it. It looks like you asked at just the right time and in just the right place. The best answer you ever received to any question you ever asked. Am I right?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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My guess is that luck didn't have much to do with it. It looks like you asked at just the right time and in just the right place. The best answer you ever received to any question you ever asked. Am I right?
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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It would have been had it been mine but it was not to be so. As always thank you for reading my entry.
Comment from royowen
One of the most momentous happenings in one's life, whatever the answer is, it's still cloud building, dark or white, depending on the answer, well done, blessings roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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One of the most momentous happenings in one's life, whatever the answer is, it's still cloud building, dark or white, depending on the answer, well done, blessings roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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All smiles
Comment from jessizero
You set the stage well in this seventy-five word story. The payoff was worth it. Also, the picture you took complemented the work well. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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You set the stage well in this seventy-five word story. The payoff was worth it. Also, the picture you took complemented the work well. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Where would we r without women?
