Loving Desire
She is a perfect partner.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Loving Desire, takes the readers on a walk-about which p4oves to be even more exciting than was first expected. Few have seen these sights and only on paper.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This poem, Loving Desire, takes the readers on a walk-about which p4oves to be even more exciting than was first expected. Few have seen these sights and only on paper.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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And glorious sights they are. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The image could have stood alone and gotten five stars; however your sentiments enflame on paper how she enflamed you physically. One lucky guy but that is no surprise to you.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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The image could have stood alone and gotten five stars; however your sentiments enflame on paper how she enflamed you physically. One lucky guy but that is no surprise to you.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Yeah, I know it. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good response to the writing prompt. In many ways, it is beautifully written soft erotica that cherishes and celebrates the body of the beloved. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Good response to the writing prompt. In many ways, it is beautifully written soft erotica that cherishes and celebrates the body of the beloved. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from LostInSilence
The first line is a little hard to read. I think you mean want only to not wantonly.
This is a lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery of a traveler exploring her being. It is nicely written.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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The first line is a little hard to read. I think you mean want only to not wantonly.
This is a lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery of a traveler exploring her being. It is nicely written.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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No, I meant wantonly. The meaning is in a lustful or sexually unrestrained way. So I disagree with your comment. I believe the word is appropriate for the tone of the poem. However, thanks for the read and feedback.
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Well I learned a new word today. Thank you for the repsonse.
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You are welcome.