Kids Light Up Our World
They smile big.4 total reviews
Comment from amahra
I read them all and this one made me smile. I also loved the artwork you chose for this awesome one-nine-one poem. I voted and best wishes in the contest. This one is very deserving.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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I read them all and this one made me smile. I also loved the artwork you chose for this awesome one-nine-one poem. I voted and best wishes in the contest. This one is very deserving.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
And their great sayings, too. I love being around children so much. They never seem to run out of joy, themselves, or spreading it to those around them. Wonderful poem. I bet it will do well in the polls.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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And their great sayings, too. I love being around children so much. They never seem to run out of joy, themselves, or spreading it to those around them. Wonderful poem. I bet it will do well in the polls.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 1-9-1 poem. The message is clearly presented. I like the text being a color. The font could be a tad larger for my old eyes, but most would see it as being okay. I think the text would also look better centered. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This is a good 1-9-1 poem. The message is clearly presented. I like the text being a color. The font could be a tad larger for my old eyes, but most would see it as being okay. I think the text would also look better centered. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
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I centered it
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It's not centered on the visual. It is still to the left.
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No I centered it the best I could.
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Okay, I understand. However, if you go to advanced editor, you can get it to the true center.
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I did.
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There are 4 sets of horizontal lines on the bar with all the options. Highlight your text and click on the second set of horizontal bars from the left. When you hover over it you will see the word center. Then just click save at the bottom of the page.
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I got it centered. You may want to read my new poem.
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I must wait until I know who you are to see it! lol
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and nice presentation.
-A good topic for your poem.
-Effective opening and closing words
and a positive message about the joy children bring.
-You have 8 syllables in the middle line;
I am guessing you meant: [with] all of their
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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-Good image and nice presentation.
-A good topic for your poem.
-Effective opening and closing words
and a positive message about the joy children bring.
-You have 8 syllables in the middle line;
I am guessing you meant: [with] all of their
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Nine syllables now. Thanks!