Rainbow Path
Rainbow 5.7.55 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the rainbow. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I had a hard time reading the yellow letters. I don't know if anyone else did or not. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the rainbow. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I had a hard time reading the yellow letters. I don't know if anyone else did or not. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Rainbow Path, has the proper formatting and takes the readers to the imagined end of the rainbow where dreams are realized. Nice looking poem.
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This tanka, Rainbow Path, has the proper formatting and takes the readers to the imagined end of the rainbow where dreams are realized. Nice looking poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
Comment from Brandon Clark
Nice! Great picture and message. Hopefully the land of joy includes a pot of gold, but otherwise sounds like it's worth following the rainbow to the end to find whatever is there. Sort of an allegory for life, I suppose. Great job and thanks for sharing it!!
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Nice! Great picture and message. Hopefully the land of joy includes a pot of gold, but otherwise sounds like it's worth following the rainbow to the end to find whatever is there. Sort of an allegory for life, I suppose. Great job and thanks for sharing it!!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
Comment from Mark D. R.
I like the poem entry and your color scheme for text.
From my viewpoint, each line is a separate thought and therefore may be best served with a period at the end of each line. IMHO if you do not use initial caps, I would then prefer no periods.
I am OK with 'Land of Joy' as is.
Observation: The yellow text line does not have a sharp contrast with your existing background color.
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I like the poem entry and your color scheme for text.
From my viewpoint, each line is a separate thought and therefore may be best served with a period at the end of each line. IMHO if you do not use initial caps, I would then prefer no periods.
I am OK with 'Land of Joy' as is.
Observation: The yellow text line does not have a sharp contrast with your existing background color.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
Comment from royowen
I do know that God installed the rainbow as a promise that the earth would no more be destroyed by flood, mind you, it hadn't rained up to that point, this is beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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I do know that God installed the rainbow as a promise that the earth would no more be destroyed by flood, mind you, it hadn't rained up to that point, this is beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022