Invigorating Rain
I love...10 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
Very good. Have to love the video you used. Perfect. Congrats on your contest winning entry. You have a winning entry even without the visual.
Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Very good. Have to love the video you used. Perfect. Congrats on your contest winning entry. You have a winning entry even without the visual.
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great 5/7/5 for the I Love contest. Good syllables count and grammatical connection between lines. I like the presentation too. I know what you mean, I love storms and the smell of wet ground, it's so beautiful.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Great 5/7/5 for the I Love contest. Good syllables count and grammatical connection between lines. I like the presentation too. I know what you mean, I love storms and the smell of wet ground, it's so beautiful.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate you. :)
Comment from wierdgrace
Oh the winter stormy days, great entry for this contest, and I love the sound of oceans outside of my window, but since I don't live there, I love the sound of rain, and stormy weather, I sleep like a baby then. well done, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Oh the winter stormy days, great entry for this contest, and I love the sound of oceans outside of my window, but since I don't live there, I love the sound of rain, and stormy weather, I sleep like a baby then. well done, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the I Love writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the moving rain. Made me feel like I was right in the middle of it. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the I Love writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the moving rain. Made me feel like I was right in the middle of it. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this nice review....I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This love 5-7-5, Invigorating Rain, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a good rain storn cleans the air, wakes up the earth, and shocks our endorphins to feel.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This love 5-7-5, Invigorating Rain, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a good rain storn cleans the air, wakes up the earth, and shocks our endorphins to feel.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks for this terrific review, its always appreciated. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 poem on what you love. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. I love these things too, especially after a hot summer day. I would expand the poem box. Drop the first line down one
space and hit enter a couple of times after your last word. Now your poem box has better spacing around your text. Your gif visual is superb. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem on what you love. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. I love these things too, especially after a hot summer day. I would expand the poem box. Drop the first line down one
space and hit enter a couple of times after your last word. Now your poem box has better spacing around your text. Your gif visual is superb. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A wonderful seasonal poem. The flow is good. The images both visual and written are clear. The presentation adds much to the poem. A good overall presentation.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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A wonderful seasonal poem. The flow is good. The images both visual and written are clear. The presentation adds much to the poem. A good overall presentation.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Invigorating Rain"
This contest entry speaks of the Love for rain.
And, how God's amazing ability to put on a show.
I know I've always been fascinated with a good thunder and lightning show it keeps us in reality and in touch with our own mortal presence on Earth.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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"Invigorating Rain"
This contest entry speaks of the Love for rain.
And, how God's amazing ability to put on a show.
I know I've always been fascinated with a good thunder and lightning show it keeps us in reality and in touch with our own mortal presence on Earth.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks, I feel the same way as you do. I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from pit viper
Great poem. I love the spare use of language that nevertheless gets the point across. I also love rain; especially thunderstorms and the way it smells after rain.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Great poem. I love the spare use of language that nevertheless gets the point across. I also love rain; especially thunderstorms and the way it smells after rain.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Yes! You are definitely a kindred spirit. Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hah! We are experiencing quite a few of those days at the moment and I would venture to suggest that the love of these days decreases in relation to their frequency!
Nice visual and auditory imagery squeezed into the 5-7-5 format.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Hah! We are experiencing quite a few of those days at the moment and I would venture to suggest that the love of these days decreases in relation to their frequency!
Nice visual and auditory imagery squeezed into the 5-7-5 format.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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I've never met a rainy day I didn't like! :) Thank you for this nice review.