Steps
For My Dad20 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
"How sweet it is," said Jackie Gleason, a popular actor of the fifties and sixties. Could he have likely known your dad, for the two of use similar syntaxes. :-) Well done, and you finished number one for your submission "Steps."
Welcome to our club.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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"How sweet it is," said Jackie Gleason, a popular actor of the fifties and sixties. Could he have likely known your dad, for the two of use similar syntaxes. :-) Well done, and you finished number one for your submission "Steps."
Welcome to our club.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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I thank you, Tom, for the feedback and kind words! I think he had a fear of flying too, is that right? Another similarity- my dad is a terrible flyer. Go figure!
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JG feared flying too
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't read much poetry, but noticing a few of those I do read, read you, so I'm back for more. And for this one I'm glad I came. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I don't read much poetry, but noticing a few of those I do read, read you, so I'm back for more. And for this one I'm glad I came. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Youre awesome, thank you!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful poem about your dad. Oh goodness, you could put tears in a person's eyes reading this poem. I have to give you a well written rating. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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What a wonderful poem about your dad. Oh goodness, you could put tears in a person's eyes reading this poem. I have to give you a well written rating. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
<3 <3
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous thing that your dad is your rock, your source of inspiration, your moral compass, your friend and unconditional lover of your soul, that is some recommendation, beautifully written entry in this contest. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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What a marvellous thing that your dad is your rock, your source of inspiration, your moral compass, your friend and unconditional lover of your soul, that is some recommendation, beautifully written entry in this contest. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy <3
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a beautiful piece that speaks to the wonderful fathers out there in the world. It made me think of my Dad and how he has always been there for me. My biggest fan, and it sounds like you are your father's biggest fan as well.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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That is a beautiful piece that speaks to the wonderful fathers out there in the world. It made me think of my Dad and how he has always been there for me. My biggest fan, and it sounds like you are your father's biggest fan as well.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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You?re correct! Thanks so much for your review.<3
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are filled with admiration. The poem is descriptive
and creative. I found these words filled with love and praise. A beautiful
tribute! I liked how this author used many examples of support and
love from her Dad. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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The author's words are filled with admiration. The poem is descriptive
and creative. I found these words filled with love and praise. A beautiful
tribute! I liked how this author used many examples of support and
love from her Dad. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Marienkiefer
A wonderful tributary poem.
-Interesting variations on the walk through life: the gait, the stroll, the cat walk, the footsteps, the tightrope walk and the walk to our destinies.
-Beautiful integrative poem, balancing well the philosophical and the creative mind.
-Repetition of: He, is a very impactful device to show the weight of influence of the person referred to, like a pillar of constancy and strength.
A wonderful writing style. Interesting to read poem for its explorations and design.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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A wonderful tributary poem.
-Interesting variations on the walk through life: the gait, the stroll, the cat walk, the footsteps, the tightrope walk and the walk to our destinies.
-Beautiful integrative poem, balancing well the philosophical and the creative mind.
-Repetition of: He, is a very impactful device to show the weight of influence of the person referred to, like a pillar of constancy and strength.
A wonderful writing style. Interesting to read poem for its explorations and design.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!!
<3
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This is a lovely tribute to your dad. I'm glad you have someone of such integrity you can look up to. I enjoyed reading about him and hope the poem does well.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This is a lovely tribute to your dad. I'm glad you have someone of such integrity you can look up to. I enjoyed reading about him and hope the poem does well.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much <3
Comment from Brandon Clark
Excellent! You did a great job following the prompt and I couldn't see anything I would change. Your choice of words was impeccable and made the poem read well!
Best of luck in the contest!
Brandon
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Excellent! You did a great job following the prompt and I couldn't see anything I would change. Your choice of words was impeccable and made the poem read well!
Best of luck in the contest!
Brandon
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Brandon! <3
Comment from jaded831
What a beautiful tribute to your father, or what a father hopefully is to most of us. Every word flowed like music. My father smelled like old spice and cigars, to this day those smells bring back memories.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful tribute to your father, or what a father hopefully is to most of us. Every word flowed like music. My father smelled like old spice and cigars, to this day those smells bring back memories.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I love how a simple smell can trigger treasured memories. <3