Poetry Collected in Tears
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Comment from JSD
Another intriguing and thought-provoking poem, Ricky. I love your surreal and abstract approach, especially your second line, and the clever play on 'spin'. Well done.
John
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Another intriguing and thought-provoking poem, Ricky. I love your surreal and abstract approach, especially your second line, and the clever play on 'spin'. Well done.
John
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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This is one of my more enjoyable works about one out of 100 I actually do. Enjoy!.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness this is an inquisitive piece that asks many intriguing heartfelt questions.
This part is genius:Pollution - The Constitution.
Greed- Our Forefathers.
Envy- Theft
What you Got I want to take!
Racism- The Gettysburg Address.
Pain and Suffering- Mother Teresa. Trust- Ashes to Ashes.
Dust to Dust.
Very good, indeed, Doc. Deserves a six.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Oh my goodness this is an inquisitive piece that asks many intriguing heartfelt questions.
This part is genius:Pollution - The Constitution.
Greed- Our Forefathers.
Envy- Theft
What you Got I want to take!
Racism- The Gettysburg Address.
Pain and Suffering- Mother Teresa. Trust- Ashes to Ashes.
Dust to Dust.
Very good, indeed, Doc. Deserves a six.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Glad yo share thos one with you Douglas.
Doctor Ricky1024