Comment from estory

Excellent

I liked it. There's a wonderful surreal, dream like quality to the prose poetry here, and the images of frothy bubbles of color and golden fishes and the hunt for them is a wonderful symbol of the contemporary momentary fulfillment mind set. estory

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

True wisdom only comes from God. We often search all over for it but are unable to find it. Thank you for sharing this post with us. It gives words for thought and that's a really good thing.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A thoughtful reflection! I like how you allude to that fairy tale about the fish that grants three wishes. People are always seeking their dreams and sometimes have to edit their dreams. But in reality, if some got their dreams, they may be disappointed. It's best to be content first and then seek those dreams.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

My goodness this paints but a bleak outlook on the shallowness of humanity.

It does make one think about the lesser instinctual emotions though. The ones that put us on auto-drive and move us through life's little loops.

Interesting.
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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023