Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This was a fun contest entry to read. I enjoyed reading and smiles as I read thinking of the connotation of the words. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024

Thanks for kind feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We love and we sometimes suffer loss and it never stops us enjoying romantic moments Julie, a poignant write for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024

Thank you for your feedback.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

One wouldn't have thought this would come together so cohesively and genuinely to a broken romance, but it did for me, and I enjoyed the read. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024

Thank you for your feedback.