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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The still of night"... Freeverse ...
5 total reviews
Comment from Wy Jung
This made me laugh. Very well written. That MONSTER - "the writhing mass of blatant wrath" crracked me up. I had to reread it once I knew what you were talking about. Thanks for the chuckle.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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This made me laugh. Very well written. That MONSTER - "the writhing mass of blatant wrath" crracked me up. I had to reread it once I knew what you were talking about. Thanks for the chuckle.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Any time my friend anytime ... !
Comment from JSD
Mmmmm. Lovely! But very amusing and clever to turn a seemingly earnest angst ridden poem into a poo-em. Thanks very much for posting this, I think!
John
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Mmmmm. Lovely! But very amusing and clever to turn a seemingly earnest angst ridden poem into a poo-em. Thanks very much for posting this, I think!
John
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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so long as it was the obvious ... crap !
Comment from Jacob1395
This is quite a dark and emotive piece. In my head I was picturing someone struggling with depression as I was reading it. A well written piece. I thought your writing flowed really well.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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This is quite a dark and emotive piece. In my head I was picturing someone struggling with depression as I was reading it. A well written piece. I thought your writing flowed really well.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Many thanks my friend !
Comment from Navada
This is a chilling evocation of what it must feel like to experience possession or even undue influence from dark forces. The visual image you've chosen really helps to enhance this theme. Thanks for the share.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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This is a chilling evocation of what it must feel like to experience possession or even undue influence from dark forces. The visual image you've chosen really helps to enhance this theme. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Anytime ... thank you ... it is almost demonic !
Comment from Janis M.
lol. I'm starting to understand your poems now. Even before half way and I was thinking.. oh yes, this sounds exactly like the nonsense my husband says. It's a poop poem! Well done on this one
Chuckle worthy humor
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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lol. I'm starting to understand your poems now. Even before half way and I was thinking.. oh yes, this sounds exactly like the nonsense my husband says. It's a poop poem! Well done on this one
Chuckle worthy humor
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Excellent ... glad you could enjoy it ... the poem that is ... there's another one you may like different take on things still Freeverse see what you think !