Comment from
Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. The line of the poem connects well with each other. Your poem paints a good mental picture of dancing of seeing the effects of Spring. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
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Comment from
RodG
Nature--especially in early Spring--has all kinds of new flowers that make one want to "dance and sing." I like your subtle use of rhyme. I wish you luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
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