Anticipation!
High...9 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great entry for the "5-5-5" poetry prompt. I also liked that you used rhyme. It really was cheerful! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I think this was a great entry for the "5-5-5" poetry prompt. I also liked that you used rhyme. It really was cheerful! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much, l appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Douglas Goff
We are so ready for Spring here in Michigan. Bring it on, please!
Nice color scheme.
Great piece of work. Good luck in the competition. Fun read.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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We are so ready for Spring here in Michigan. Bring it on, please!
Nice color scheme.
Great piece of work. Good luck in the competition. Fun read.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Perfect title for this very cheerful and upbeat 5-5-5 about the advent of spring. Your monorhyme is also very pleasing and assured. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Perfect title for this very cheerful and upbeat 5-5-5 about the advent of spring. Your monorhyme is also very pleasing and assured. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words in your poem are so spring; like they are saying, I'm ready, bring on spring. The image is gorgeous and I like the sparkling pink atmosphere.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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The words in your poem are so spring; like they are saying, I'm ready, bring on spring. The image is gorgeous and I like the sparkling pink atmosphere.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Yes, I am looking forward to Spring. Your 5-5-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Good rhyming throughout your poem. Nice picture.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Yes, I am looking forward to Spring. Your 5-5-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Good rhyming throughout your poem. Nice picture.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-5-5, Anticipation!, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the next season coming has winter beat by a lot. There is only one season better.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This 5-5-5, Anticipation!, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the next season coming has winter beat by a lot. There is only one season better.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, i'm so happy you liked it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-5-5 poetry writing prompt. A lovely ode to Spring. The syllable count meets the criteria. The graphics used along with the background and font colors all add to the essence of the poem. nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-5-5 poetry writing prompt. A lovely ode to Spring. The syllable count meets the criteria. The graphics used along with the background and font colors all add to the essence of the poem. nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, l appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
-The exuberance and colours of Spring are encouring everyone's writes this morning as spring is shared around and awaited. A lovely 5-5-5 poem about a lovely time of year. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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-The exuberance and colours of Spring are encouring everyone's writes this morning as spring is shared around and awaited. A lovely 5-5-5 poem about a lovely time of year. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Saki the Artist
This is a perfectly fine, nice poem. The rhymes are a nice bonus. Good choice of artwork.
Suggestion: don't capitalize the B in the last line. If you like to capitalize the B, then you should also capitalize the first word in the second line.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This is a perfectly fine, nice poem. The rhymes are a nice bonus. Good choice of artwork.
Suggestion: don't capitalize the B in the last line. If you like to capitalize the B, then you should also capitalize the first word in the second line.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the helpful suggestion. I've already fixed it. :)
