Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Oh wow!!!! What an amazing adventure and poem! The fun thing is, the encounter is hinted at. You have a lot of build up to meeting the mermaid, then did it happen or not?? I'm voting it happened.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

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reply by the author on 31-May-2024

I'd wager that you're right. Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very beautifully worded and I enjoyed listening to it very much. You have done a wonderful job with it. Your rhyming is good. Your story is good and it's just a wonderful piece. Thank you so much for sharing. Patricia .This is very beautifully worded and I enjoyed listening to it very much. You have done a wonderful job with it. You're rhyming is good. Your story is good and it's just a wonderful piece. Thank you so much for sharing. Patricia .

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

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reply by the author on 31-May-2024

Thank you ever so much Patricia. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on it.

reply by patcelaw on 01-Jun-2024

Would you please keep me in your prayers. I am going through a lot of things emotionally right now and I need prayers.

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024

I will absolutely keep you in my prayers. May God help you through this and may all come out well.