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Lucky Socks

Poor little Soctopus.

5 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
I like the sock taking things into its own hands and finding his own way home. It is good the lucky socks are together again. I like the personification. I also like the pun of sole and soul.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Joan :)
reply by dragonpoet on 06-Jun-2024
    No problem.
    Joan
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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This was a really adorable little story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I could feel poor Socktopus's pain. Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Monica.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Wonderful stuff from a poet who know all about punning and doing it in style. Such a sweet story too! I'm delighted that Soctapus and Coma-toes got back together again and I wish them the very best of luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Debbie :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Lucky Socks, tells a lost sock tale that stands tall on all ten toes and cannot be shoed into a defined stocking spot. Good to see Soctopus and Comatoes paired back up.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Bill.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good anti-for the contest. Good luck with that.!

Wow. What a delightful story. That sock does look like a giant bumble bee. I'd be screaming, afraid to approach because I'm allergic

Such a charming story. I'll bet you place in the contest

But, at least you get a surprise from me

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Six stars!!!

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Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Wow. Thank you, Pam.