Comment from
jessizero
I liked this "silly little idea" of a story told in poem form. Your rhymes were fun, as were the questionings and accusations. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
Thank you. I truly appreciate your reading and then commenting on it.
Comment from
Mintybee
I liked this fun play on a murder investigation. I suppose seasons die out before a new one comes in, but that's an offbeat way to approach them. The imagery worked well. They rhyme worked well. I enjoyed this.
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
Yeah, I'm not really sure that seasons die, but they do end for a time. I know it was kind of quirky, but it came to me so I thought I'd go ahead and write it out. I appreciate your having read and reviewed it.