Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Nifty and bright little poem. I am still not through moving.I will be looking in from time to time until I am settled. I miss being here and your friendship. Good work here. Karen

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

Thank you, Karen. Me too!

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 22-Jun-2024

:-)

Comment from Deborah Dybowski

Excellent

You have written a well-received poem describing the beginning of a new
day with sky painted with brush strokes of vibrant blues and the sun's
golden rays. You have chosen the perfect picture for your three line poem.
I'm happy your poem has been recognized. It deserves to be. Also,
good use of alliteration.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

Thank you! I was hoping someone would pick up on the alliteration!

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

What a vibrant view to start the day off with! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with your words.... so much lighter than the other side of you ...and me! LOL Good kuch in the contest! Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

Thank you, Carol. Yes, I let the light peek in . . . .once in awhile.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

What a change from demons and blood and gore. Lol! A really beautiful 577, bursting with color and stunning imagery. Very nicely done and a pleasure to read!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

Thank you! I had to turn the ACDC down in the old age home (One reviewers advice!)

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

So true D, Mother Nature's brush strokes are always colourful and always different. I love your closing line - dancing with the suns gold rays
Nice one D and good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thanks, Valda! Great to hear from you, my friend!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That is a very lovely 3 line poem, and it is beautifully composed with lyrical imagery. And easily remembered too. Well done. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thank you, my friend!

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is very descriptive and well worded for the three line poetry contest. I l love the vibrant blue of summer skies and especially if they have few puffy white clouds floating around. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thank you! Glad to hear from you, Beth!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I get the message loud and clea. That said why are contest limited to form such as 5-7-5. Is this consider a tanka? Artwork is 'brilliant.' A shout out to Seshadri

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

That is an awesome picture. Not a Tanka, more of a Haiku. Not sure why it was worded that way.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Lovely, Doug! And not a trace of blood or gore! No seriously, this is a delight to read and view. The sun shines out of your post and you've captured that visual perfectly in your 3 line poem with not a word wasted. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thanks, Debbie. I don?t always go dark. Ha!

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Author,
Your bright poem is an excellent entry for the three line contest
The photo is beautiful.
'one correction: "suns" should be "sun's".
Good luck with this poem.
Cindy

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

I decided to drop punctuation as it is a prom and that is often optional. Was it distracting?