Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This contest entry makes us self-reflect. That is a really good thing to do. I believe we don't do it often enough. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thanks Barbara for your kind words and stars.

Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao !

To please society , to fit in we create an image of ourself that doesn't really represent our true character.

To know our true being we don't need eyes;

Instead, we need to learn to listen to our inner soul when it speak to us.

Through meditation we can connect to our inner feelings.

Immersing ourselves in nature's arm helps this process.

The more time and attention we put into the relationship with our soul , the more magical and truthful our life will become.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

all very true! probably
more insightful than my original concept

do consider writing one with your thought (-;

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Written short form in the free poetry contest and I wish you the very best I wish you also a very good weekend and may God bless. Have a wonderful weekend.Patricia

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thanks Patricia. Stay cool.

Mark

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi, Mark

There is deep meaning here. I'm thinking of a time when one gets out of the shower and her daughter's boyfriend has stopped over unexpectedly

I'm sure you're right she probably feels naked, but she doesn't need a mirror to know that

That is where the deeper meaning is

I really enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

My guess, your shower story will make a funny poem if you are so inclined to do. I never experienced your scenario LOL

Mark

reply by Pamusart on 21-Jun-2024

lol Mark. If I can remember it later. My memory is faulty.