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Comment from shelley kaye
unsure about "eyelids" being is this romantic yet sorrow-filled poem ... but that could be just me lol
other than that, a great senryu suite about missing loved ones
cool pics and the shades of blue are perfect
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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unsure about "eyelids" being is this romantic yet sorrow-filled poem ... but that could be just me lol
other than that, a great senryu suite about missing loved ones
cool pics and the shades of blue are perfect
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Those senses are subtly incorporated into your senryu to create an all-encompassing sensation of loss and poignancy. Beautifully presented with a rather hypnotic, meditative tone. Thanks you for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Those senses are subtly incorporated into your senryu to create an all-encompassing sensation of loss and poignancy. Beautifully presented with a rather hypnotic, meditative tone. Thanks you for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You always know how to evoke all the senses in your poem! And the suite of senryu flows to show each sense. I especially liked the personification in "moon rays squeeze through the blinds searching for your eye lids"
It's always cool when you get inspiration at night. It says in Job35:10 that God is the One "Who gives songs in the night."
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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You always know how to evoke all the senses in your poem! And the suite of senryu flows to show each sense. I especially liked the personification in "moon rays squeeze through the blinds searching for your eye lids"
It's always cool when you get inspiration at night. It says in Job35:10 that God is the One "Who gives songs in the night."
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your wonderful review and positive feedback.
love
marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
I know that senryu poetry are very deep, and this one certainly is. I love your engaging of the five senses, made so more intriguing with the use of the Mockingbird. This is,a strong and haunting poem, that is skillfully presented with vivid imagery.
Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I know that senryu poetry are very deep, and this one certainly is. I love your engaging of the five senses, made so more intriguing with the use of the Mockingbird. This is,a strong and haunting poem, that is skillfully presented with vivid imagery.
Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very cool . I love how the line about the moon light searched for his face. It was as if the moonlight missed him as well. Very well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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This was very cool . I love how the line about the moon light searched for his face. It was as if the moonlight missed him as well. Very well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can feel the pain of a lost love. The following stanza is perfect.
moon rays
squeeze through the blinds
searching for your eye lids
Oh my, my heart aches. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I can feel the pain of a lost love. The following stanza is perfect.
moon rays
squeeze through the blinds
searching for your eye lids
Oh my, my heart aches. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I think we would all remember the passing of a dear one, but there are others too that we can still remember, even though they may not have touched us physically, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Oh yes, I think we would all remember the passing of a dear one, but there are others too that we can still remember, even though they may not have touched us physically, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
The older I become, the more this becomes the harbinger of my worst nightmare. I hope it never comes to fruition - that I pass before my sweet husband.
This is another exquisite poem. It evoked all kinds of emotions for me, which all good writing does. Great work, Gypsy. xo
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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The older I become, the more this becomes the harbinger of my worst nightmare. I hope it never comes to fruition - that I pass before my sweet husband.
This is another exquisite poem. It evoked all kinds of emotions for me, which all good writing does. Great work, Gypsy. xo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Having a sweet husband is a gift and I wish you a long life together. Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very right!! He is my first prayer of gratitude every day! xo
