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Children Hurt, Too

When children are used as pawns, it hurts them, too.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Many adults are so selfish that they only think about themselves and not about the children in the situation. I hate seeing that. Good luck with the contest. I can't say I enjoyed reading, but only because of the subject. It hurts to see children hurting and I have seen it way too often.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
    I understand completely. This is based on my b****y a** daughter and her way of acting. Thank you for reviewing. Please pray for my granddaughter, as well as myself.
Comment from karenina
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I know this one comes from your heart,
Monica...

I'm glad you doubled up on the five lines, for every point you made is so important.

No one wins in this scenario...least of all the child!

Karenina

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you. It is especially cruel to the child when they have a relationship with the grandparent and then have it ripped away. I appreciate you reviewing.
reply by karenina on 09-Jul-2024
    I agree. Children need their grandmom!
Comment from Reanna Ashburn
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This turned out so be a really good ABC poem. Sometimes, writing to fit that format can be hard due to finding sentences that fit due to its letters.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you. It is especially cruel to the child when they have a relationship with the grandparent and then have it ripped away. I appreciate you reviewing.