Agnes's Date
A little bit of deception.7 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a cute story for the "laughter flash" writing prompt. It definitely made me laugh. I can imagine this happening. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was a cute story for the "laughter flash" writing prompt. It definitely made me laugh. I can imagine this happening. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think I might have shed a tear for poor Agnes. Funny how our reflection will sometimes delude us into thinking we are a lot prettier and thinner than we actually are. This was an amusing piece of flash. Gretchen
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I think I might have shed a tear for poor Agnes. Funny how our reflection will sometimes delude us into thinking we are a lot prettier and thinner than we actually are. This was an amusing piece of flash. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Mike may have been nice with good intent but if the woman he saw dressed in pink looked anything like the picture pictured here it was good he ended it before it began.
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Mike may have been nice with good intent but if the woman he saw dressed in pink looked anything like the picture pictured here it was good he ended it before it began.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A good entry for the Laughter Fladh writing prompt. In all actuality this is probably exactly.how the scenario goes in real life lol. You've met the 50 word criteria with a good flash story. Good luck in the contest
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A good entry for the Laughter Fladh writing prompt. In all actuality this is probably exactly.how the scenario goes in real life lol. You've met the 50 word criteria with a good flash story. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like good entry to the contest. Good luck with that!!
I guess he deleted his kinder account because otherwise she might contact him again. That makes sense.
I don't blame him for not wanting to take an old lady out for a date, but he could just sit with her at the bar and talk to her
I wonder how often that happens that somebody posts somebody else's photo on these dating sites
By the way, possessive of Agnes is Agnes'. The rule for words ending in S to make them possessive if you just add the quote at the end
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like good entry to the contest. Good luck with that!!
I guess he deleted his kinder account because otherwise she might contact him again. That makes sense.
I don't blame him for not wanting to take an old lady out for a date, but he could just sit with her at the bar and talk to her
I wonder how often that happens that somebody posts somebody else's photo on these dating sites
By the way, possessive of Agnes is Agnes'. The rule for words ending in S to make them possessive if you just add the quote at the end
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. This did make me laugh, mainly because I am sure that sort of thing does happen, and he would run rather than wait and see if just maybe there was anyone else wearing pink. Well told. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Lol. This did make me laugh, mainly because I am sure that sort of thing does happen, and he would run rather than wait and see if just maybe there was anyone else wearing pink. Well told. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I have to admit I did laugh. But it was because this is so mean. I feel like you went over the line but I still have a grin on my face. Great job with the storytelling. I didn't expect it to go this way. I don't know what this says about me!
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I have to admit I did laugh. But it was because this is so mean. I feel like you went over the line but I still have a grin on my face. Great job with the storytelling. I didn't expect it to go this way. I don't know what this says about me!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024