On a Moonlit Desert Road
I could if she would see us...14 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. You have all the necessary elements for a story, characters, plot, setting, and solution. Although not what the husband wanted. LOl Good luck with the contest.
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LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. You have all the necessary elements for a story, characters, plot, setting, and solution. Although not what the husband wanted. LOl Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Tom,
I feel bad for you man. I've been married 52 years, and we still get together now and then, fortunately. As the saying goes, just because there is snow on the mountain top doesn't mean there isn't fire in the furnace. I hope your luck changes soon. Have a blessed evening my friend.
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Hello Tom,
I feel bad for you man. I've been married 52 years, and we still get together now and then, fortunately. As the saying goes, just because there is snow on the mountain top doesn't mean there isn't fire in the furnace. I hope your luck changes soon. Have a blessed evening my friend.
Tom
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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All is well
Comment from GWHARGIS
That's hilarious, Tom. I've never used the word forthwith, but you can bet I will now. I enjoyed this fantasy almost romp. Cold showers will definitely cut the fantasy short. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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That's hilarious, Tom. I've never used the word forthwith, but you can bet I will now. I enjoyed this fantasy almost romp. Cold showers will definitely cut the fantasy short. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I am surprised how ascceptable this entry has been with my female friends
I took a chance with my dementedness and seemingly gained approval
Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I probably shouldn't have, but I laughed at this. I think it's a great entry for the flash fiction contest. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I probably shouldn't have, but I laughed at this. I think it's a great entry for the flash fiction contest. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Near fifty years of learning her curves I still would like to
Connect for
Hit once in a while but then as Dirty Harry has a way of saying " A man ought to know his limitations."
Comment from karenina
"To sleep, perchance to dream!" (So said Will)--
That was one steamy dream Tom! I'm sure it was a bummer to wake up and realize...well...that a cold shower was going to be the grand finale!
(smile)
You always handle these flashes with a clever twist and I thoroughly enjoyed this one!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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"To sleep, perchance to dream!" (So said Will)--
That was one steamy dream Tom! I'm sure it was a bummer to wake up and realize...well...that a cold shower was going to be the grand finale!
(smile)
You always handle these flashes with a clever twist and I thoroughly enjoyed this one!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Near fifty years of learning her curves I still would like to
Connect for
Hit once in a while but then as Dirty Harry has a way of saying " A man ought to know his limitations."
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Smile.
It's lovely so see a man still so smitten with his wife!
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YEp. Smitten is a perfect word, for the perfect women for me because she was patient and allowed me to be me yet in doing so captured my attention fully.
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A match made in heaven!
Comment from Begin Again
Guess it was one of those headache nights LOL! A great 75 word flash though if I must say so myself. I enjoyed it and yes fantasies do come to an end...some more abruptly than others.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Guess it was one of those headache nights LOL! A great 75 word flash though if I must say so myself. I enjoyed it and yes fantasies do come to an end...some more abruptly than others.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Near fifty years of learning her curves I still would like to
Connect for
Hit once in a while but then as Dirty Harry has a way of saying " A man ought to know his limitations."
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile as your dreaming started some unwanted movements in the nether regions here Tom, I hope the cold shower did the trick, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile as your dreaming started some unwanted movements in the nether regions here Tom, I hope the cold shower did the trick, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Near fifty years of learning her curves I still would like to
Connect for
Hit once in a while but then as Dirty Harry has a way of saying " A man ought to know his limitations."
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL. Your luck sound a bit like mine. Well, all but I don't have a beautiful bride to wake me up and tell me to get a cold shower. My interruption would be a knock on the door or the phone. But either way, those fleeting moments can't be disrupted. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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LOL. Your luck sound a bit like mine. Well, all but I don't have a beautiful bride to wake me up and tell me to get a cold shower. My interruption would be a knock on the door or the phone. But either way, those fleeting moments can't be disrupted. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Always yours
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Always yours
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done Sir Thomas. You have a knack for descriptive writing in short prose.
Good luck in your most groovy short story contest. I find that I really enjoy the flash contests.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Nicely done Sir Thomas. You have a knack for descriptive writing in short prose.
Good luck in your most groovy short story contest. I find that I really enjoy the flash contests.
D
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I, too, like the 75 word tests. Fifty, almost as well. Haikus not at all. I thought I painted a picture well enough to deserve an atta-a-boy, and one from you makes it even better. Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
You much have dreaming out out for her to know you needed a shower. I just wouldn't have wanted to been part of the fantasy. Was this fantasty in which you were sixteen again? I do see it is fantasy fiction, so I will assume that wasn't last night's dream.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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You much have dreaming out out for her to know you needed a shower. I just wouldn't have wanted to been part of the fantasy. Was this fantasty in which you were sixteen again? I do see it is fantasy fiction, so I will assume that wasn't last night's dream.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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No, it was indeed a recurring dream. Remember it was in the desert. We were alone. The moon shining brightly. Maybe, I was cuddling her when she remarked as she did.
