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tormenting...2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
yikes! and poor Grandma pays the price. lol This is an excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt. The is great flash example done in horror form instead of humor but still giving the reader a great twist ending.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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yikes! and poor Grandma pays the price. lol This is an excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt. The is great flash example done in horror form instead of humor but still giving the reader a great twist ending.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Natureschild
Your piece vividly captures a moment of intense internal conflict and horror. The opening lines immediately create a sense of tension and dread. The sudden, violent act is shocking and evokes a strong emotional response, highlighting the struggle between conscience and primal urges. A good entry. Good luck. - Terry
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Your piece vividly captures a moment of intense internal conflict and horror. The opening lines immediately create a sense of tension and dread. The sudden, violent act is shocking and evokes a strong emotional response, highlighting the struggle between conscience and primal urges. A good entry. Good luck. - Terry
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
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You're welcome
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God Bless!
