The Poets Menagerie
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Cocoon "A collection of poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Dramatic descriptions in this poem, Lea as this journey takes us from the darkness, through flight, through betrayal and eventually to freedom. Loved this one and the emotions, for you, behind it. Good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Dramatic descriptions in this poem, Lea as this journey takes us from the darkness, through flight, through betrayal and eventually to freedom. Loved this one and the emotions, for you, behind it. Good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you again so much I really appreciate this it's a great honor!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your poetry is always amazing and causes the reader to read a few times to get all the meaning from it. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Your poetry is always amazing and causes the reader to read a few times to get all the meaning from it. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Barbara that's a fine company I appreciate it very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem and I always am happy to see your review I hope your days are full of joy and your liking the sunshine!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I wonder if this could all result in "a jail cell's key"? The freedom you now feel from releasing this book and your pent-up anger and resentment over so many decades is palpable. Your free verse evolves dramatically from the darkness of your "paralytic flailing" to the light of exposure and liberation. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Debbie PS cr(esc)endo
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I wonder if this could all result in "a jail cell's key"? The freedom you now feel from releasing this book and your pent-up anger and resentment over so many decades is palpable. Your free verse evolves dramatically from the darkness of your "paralytic flailing" to the light of exposure and liberation. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Debbie PS cr(esc)endo
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Debbie again he always has a great reviews and your perspective is always refreshing! You have guided me very well along the way I appreciate that too more than you know I hope you're having the best day summer is rocking and you're smiling all the time! Thanks again!
Comment from BethShelby
Your poetry is always interesting and worth reading several times. I can here bits and pieces of you story intertwined in this with word like "silent screams" ,"poisonous voices", generational madness. Words written true sets you free.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Your poetry is always interesting and worth reading several times. I can here bits and pieces of you story intertwined in this with word like "silent screams" ,"poisonous voices", generational madness. Words written true sets you free.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Hi Beth how are you today thank you so much for coming and joining me again! I always enjoy your review so different from everybody else is cuz you're curious and you ask questions and you read things and you think about it so that is the great thing about you thank you again hope you have a wonderful day!
Comment from Neonewman
My favorite line.
poisonous voices flashing flat backs
a betrayal painted in reckless smiles
This reminds me of social media! This is a unique piece you have crafted for this contest, I enjoyed it well.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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My favorite line.
poisonous voices flashing flat backs
a betrayal painted in reckless smiles
This reminds me of social media! This is a unique piece you have crafted for this contest, I enjoyed it well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Steve I'm glad you like this thank you for reading and for offering your comments and your insights too!!! For your time and for your fine reading I thank you for that as well I hope you're having the best day and you're enjoying your summer!
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My pleasure, Lea.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and I enjoyed your presentation very much. I wish you the very best with all of your Viking. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This is very nicely written and I enjoyed your presentation very much. I wish you the very best with all of your Viking. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Patricia thank you for reading thanks for hanging in there with me and offering your wonderful comments and insights I'm happy to see you here I hope you have the most amazing day thank you again!